Unjointed Time

Your words are passion always great to read. Great write!-Troylato

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This Was Cobra Night

wow , this was deep , keep writing-Aaron

This is really beautiful and unique in its own way. I especially like how you finish with the piece. "The gap between the lips was widening...." This is such a perfect way to really emphasize the message of your poem. You have your own unique voice, and I can really hear it in this piece. You have your own views on your surroundings and your observations that you are really good at showing. You don't have to be completely conspicuous as to what you are trying to portray either, which I have found is a huge talent to be able to speak to your readers without completely shoving your voice and ideas down their throat. I applaud you for your originality. You really stood out from tons of other writers I've read. Thank you. -Eve

All the worsened circumstances of political issues must effecting the daily life of ordinary people...we..the posh meal of their monster like hunger!
Thanks for sharing this Satish!-Tahsin.Z 

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Eternal Nothingness

Great write my friend! Loved the word play and emotion.-Troylato

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Mammoth Blackness

Democracy of honeybees....what a thought presented!!
Feels like a special part or portion of soul is missing of you...great read.-Tahsin.Z 

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Drooping Lids

Excellent write.
I really like this poem.-Stephen

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Homeward

The words are filling my soul. Great write!-Troylato

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Death Mask

The breathtaking part of your poem the last stanza...and an amazing presentation you gave...Great morning read!-Tahsin.Z 

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Path Between The Nights

Excellent!-Laura

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Braiding The Destiny

An intensely philosophical poem, as usual, Satish ji. You have this great ability to express the most complex of thoughts and emotions. Please keep sharing.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Provocative and philosophical. Deserves deep introspection.-Niranjan Nayak, Bhubaneswar

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Soaring High

It is hard to find a place in the world when all around you is bad.
Nominated.-Ben Pickard

Beautiful, I love the end.
"In this crowd of sinners".
Very good.-Fenrir

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Homage To Unknown

Brilliant!
Resilience = a spiritual strength.-Laura

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Fireworks

You wear saffron
I go green. '
Reunion or Reconciliation?
Either way, an enchanting line!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Transcending

We get old may but stay alive at some hearts I guess! They recall us as per our deeds...
Great read of morning!-Tahsin.Z 

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A Sunny Wait...

I still wait on the highway
for a sun to climb the hill.
Subtlety is the hallmark of this poem,
It grows on you as you read on,
a lovely poem.-Aniruddha Pathak

Beautiful poem sir... -Trupti garg

A creative and compelling composition. Congrats of being chosen today!-Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon

Congratulations on your posting in this category.
The poem itself is best explained in the comments.-Robert Murray Smith

Beautiful poem.... congrats for being chosen.-Lungelo S Mbuyazi

I still wait on the highway
for a sun to climb the hill. dreams. disappointments, failures. in spite of all that hoping for a bright future... nice poem. tony.-Dr.tony Brahmin

'The dreams did not last long
in the wild eyes of geniuses.
Grace and dignity fell short of sinners.
The prince of blackness strode
on the white souls.'..is very brilliant. The poet does not lose hope for a better life. Nicely composed. Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

Absolutely brilliant! ! How the truth of this progression is detailed by you with all emotions, hopes and failings is just a perfect poem.-Bill Cantrell

I could not have been a witness
of paradox.
Lacked in the old books
I still wait on the highway
for a sun to climb the hill.
- - The idealistic dream did not last long as reality came to the fore.Virtues gave way to vices- - - -But the Poet does not lose hope- - -He still waits for the sun to climb the hill.
Such a wonderful poem selected as the Poem of the Day.-Bharati Nayak

Hats off Satish: a great poem showing your indifference to society's vices and the hope you're holding on to.-Tariq Alkaritty

Such a beautiful poem! Dreams never last long and paradox is overwhelming.......it’s a p, ensure to read this fine poem.-Savita Tyagi

What a beautiful, evocative, lyric dance through the world of things and the world of thoughts. I am taken by the °paradox° teetering gently in the morning stillness between old age and youth, innocence and experience. The play between the head and heart, what is graspable and what simply, or possibly all too complexly, is not brings to life the moment when reader meets poem. A spark of light.-Lantz Pierre

Glad to see the master of comment is back.-Robert Murray Smith

We all search and wait - that is true.-Adrian Flett

As usual and i am sure you know this is a well crafted poem The universal truth held in this work flow outward and touches i am sure many lives for we all have felt these feeling our selves at different times and in different places The summation and the helplessness expressed in 'I hold this insult
in the throes of conscience with tears.' but there is hope in the last stanza enjoyed great work on the human condition. Yes there is always hope 10 +++++.-Paul Brookes

I still wait on the highway
for a sun to climb the hill........impressive lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

The dreams did not last long! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Satish, such a well penned poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen....10++++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Hear My Voice

An interesting journey. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Day Of Anxiety

I love this beautiful write. The pen keeps flowing and the enjoyment continues. Great job!-Troylato

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Hear My Voice

I am a little surprised to not see comments on this well written piece. I especially liked that you bring the reader to the heart of yourself, your ancestry. Quite a lovely and detailed heart poem.-Debera

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Marigolds

I hold a special place in my heart for marigolds... a poet friend (Fleur) wrote one a few years ago that I have never forgotten the implied representations that were important to me at the time... even though unaware perhaps, poets often bring relatable material that lifts us up when down. As for your poem here,There are a few parts that I could highlight but they would probably not make sense in comment section. So i will just say, an interesting and good read that took me back in time, .... my goodness, how poets can affect lives is a powerful thing.-Debera

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Intensity Of A Flame

Very relevant.-Lawless

Stunning write. I don't interpret the writings when I read and I believe that it helps me in enjoying your work in its totality. Thank you for your posts.-Diamond

I love the third stanza. Powerful all on it's own. I do tend to interpret things I read, I do know that I tend to read it as to how it relates to my life and what I've gone through. Great post.-SLR

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Quietness

Everything changes and changing at the next minute, second and flick....whatever you're tryna hold slips through your hand and the things you wanna erase clings in the mind...
Another great one from you..thanks for sharing☺!!-Tahsin.Z 

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A Long Night

A complex picture of despair. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Visualization

Interesting write..We have two roads to walk upon, and hope we all choose the golden road.. Hugs-Derena

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Between Real And Unreal

Writing new note messaging God is a great duty of trust. Between real and unreal we have to accept reality. An amazing sharing is done here...Kumarmani Mahakul

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Generously

We are here for a reason. To live generously amongst the flames and shades.-Lawless

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The Acid Test

A heart wrenching death you described....questions that's hard to match with apt answers...and a mind shivering thought is - half shut eyes wil not see the moon...
Thanks for sharing this Satish.-Tahsin.Z 

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Sounds Of Silence

Beautiful written poem Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

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Crossing The Bar

Suspense As The Pause
Haunting as fear "...I will hear them, holding my breath..."-allets

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The Moral Suicide

So unique and mysterious, yet the reader gets cut by the words as a knife.-Sara Fielder

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Soundless Sleep

This Morning
The poet became one with water - I examined projected sea level rises by the end of the century. 2 feet projected. slc-allets

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Recalling

A classic recall of the wolf in Red Riding Hood's cloak. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Stopping The Moonligh

The title is stuck on my mind!
And the two lines The seven colors are wearing the dark dresses, and Let me write my name without alphabets was amazing.....like you spell something in your mind magical and write!!
Thanks for sharing.-Tahsin.Z 

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Lone Wolf

Eye for eye...may everyone survive!-Laura

A bit disorienting. Yet written in your spectacular style.-Lawless

I like it but I kinda don't get it.-Dai\'lynn Green

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Something New

If a shell that protects from harm of the outer world would be miserable to live without!
But this one seems more alluring to the disaster of human life...that's hard to live with....
Strong write Satish-Tahsin.Z 

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Abusing Self

Great as always!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

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This Autumn

A profound share. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Stoking A Flame

Beautiful as always!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

The title works really well with the content. A memory so alluring, yet painful too.
Super.-Mr. Darcy

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Questions Won't End

A beautiful poem with great images. I like the format.++10 -Robert Murray Smith

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Great Expectations

As per me Good bye has two emotions...like sad and rude...even if a person happily bids farewell there's a sadness flying in him/her and sometimes someone's revengeful acts are a Good bye.....
The one who's being said good bye has many more terrible feelings going through...but when someone waits to be said Good bye....here I got to know what feels like!
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Long-Feared Night

by then... too late for words...-Laura

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Crossing The Road

I liked the word play here. It helped with the general theme.-Mr. Darcy

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Blessing

Thanks for the profound share. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Deep Tragedies

Speaking of Tragedies
I am living under a regime presently that could be coded: a deep tragedy. I wish to apologize for it. The last line of this poem breaks my heart for its truth. - Stella L. Crews, poet.-allets

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Post Valentine

Few words matters like an ocean sometimes..,here's the same for this piece (as per me)
Roses from your ashes - it has something in the number of stars in the sky,......uncountable!
Thanks for sharing.-Tahsin.Z 

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Black Script

Excellent!
...and the rider will continue to travel the never ending road!-Laura

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Sneaking Desires

Nothing short of amazing. Honest.-.k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

Your writes always intrigue me - beautiful as they are.-Mr. Darcy

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Why Are You Blue?

Sadly...the truth!-Laura

Excellent second stanza. Enjoyed the read.-Diamond

I found this to hold a deep sadness.........-Lorna

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Snaring

A superb piece as always!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

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Abstract Thoughts

Escaped soul - noted the word!
It's really energetic writing.....words that speaks out loud here...reached to the entire of mind...
Great read-Tahsin.Z 

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Fear And Love

love sustains all fears. so well expressed thoughts sir. -Aarzoo Mehek

Satish, such a profound poem....10+++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Accusing Whom?

Go forth and unload all your wealth of knowledge!-Laura

I'm hoping that I can unthink things no matter how much knowledge I accrue.
Splendid work as always. Amazing how you write so well in the same style.-Lawless

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Insights

Elucidated a true picture. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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A Smile Falters

Those blackbirds again. Thanks for reminding me to get a fly swatter.-Lawless

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Not On Crutches

Self respect is the most wealthy wealth than any huge treasure I guess...at least none other can put their rights on yours! Great read.-Tahsin.Z 

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From The Womb

Extra confusing; very nice.-Lawless

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Unwedded

So dark and moving...my gut wrenches with the power in your imagery.-Sara Fielder

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A Grave Question

Questions with such agony hides the unrevealed pain my friend.....
This was touching now!-Tahsin.Z 

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Fragments

As usual nice poem, Mr.Satish.. -veeraiyah subbulakshmi, thanjavur/Kuala Lumpur

Hard hitting! TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Unmourned

Wow this is amazing read ! As you define details of color like “white falcon” is so perfect... keep writing I loved it ...-Khadz

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Thinking Deeply About Something

Without scars,
we will never see the light!-Laura

May all the broken pieces help that shine.-Poetic Dan

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Artifacts Of Pain

Always so intriguing and mysterious...-Hopefulwoman

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