Unseeking

Dark and complex as your Quill tends to profusely bleed but the is born of the innerwirkings of a most creative Minds eye... Most mercurial you still be after all these years behind us... Behind old thoughts... Before the best to come... judgement hath no poetic justice, Satish...thus, we see our seeds with dragons teeth and God's good promise of all that's ripe in His Ever Garden, where I must believe that poetry doth exist.-Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

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God It Kills

A poem that needs introspection! My favorite lines: Of conscience/The veins of leaves will knit/the face of a brute.......Appreciated....-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Racy Dreams

Beautiful poem.-Starward

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What Was It ?

Very much like the poetry of Shamloo in Iran Nice imagery with a live heart.-Sajjad Gheytasi

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Thernodial

Wow! Profound lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Winter Tales

Beautifully articulated. Interesting reading...-Kingsley Egbukole

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Once Again

A dark reality that happens more often than people realise. I love your rich metaphors in this especially the last stanza.-Milly Hayward

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Pain Of Surrender

Imaginatively expressed. I like the images.-Poetic Poet

Beautifully crafted. Nice choice of words...-Kingsley Egbukole

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Troubled Waters

I can read between the lines. Thanks for the hard-hitting verse.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Unbecoming Of The Poem

This is my favourite of your recent poems. The start with its contrast of a fat moon and bland earth caught my attention straight away because the earth in reality is quite beautiful from space. It had to be a metaphor for how someone felt about themselves. The third stanza for me drew everything together neatly the conflict revealed and further laid out in the last two. An enjoyable read.-Milly Hayward

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Where A God Sleeps

no one really wins power games...treaties are better...i am especially blown away by..."under a cataract of twilight"----
i like how you brought in logic and pathos....there is an ethos in this...in the original script...but when we deviate from that...some of the impromptu lines and actions will lead us where we did not want to go...but where we might find...that the beat of a different drum is a really good one for us.
love this piece...
so smart and cleverly "scripted"-jacob erin-cilberto

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Map Reading

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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When Truth Was Exhumed

A beautiful piece. Nice reading....-Kingsley Egbukole

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Contemplating

A satirical take on the prevailing conditions... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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It Was My Pain

A beautifully composed poetic expression.....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Bull's-Eye

Exceptionally good! Great pen.-O'Tadghan

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Song Of Promotion

A wonderful wonderful work, as always.
Dear Satish you must watch out for these pop out question marks, they distracting glitches. Some people can not pass through them.-ddavidd

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You Survive The Day

An insightful rendition of survival. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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In Cupped Lakes

Captivating poem. Well articulated. Nice reading.-Kingsley Egbukole

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Justice

I loved imagery. Nice.-Padma, Khammam

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How Precious You Were

satish,
made me stop in my tracks & read again to make sure I got it all.
A very powerful poem.
Thanks for sharing,-Unsub

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Space Walk

A wonderfully crafted piece, sir Satish.....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Rock Truth

An interesting portrayal of truth. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Writing On Parched Skin

You always write some of the best poetry I’ve ever read.-LAWLESS

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Untethered

I don't understand this one much. But it gives a good feel!-lovergirl143

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Without Fear

Calming and thought provoking.-Lyn Paul

In tongue like nails! ! ! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Congrats on p.o.t.d. excellent write. Thumbs way up!-Butch Decatoria

Laden and layered poem with excellent metaphors, very poetically said, Satish Sir! Respectfully yours, Sylvia FC. CONGRATULATIONS for the choice of Poem Hunter as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! A 10 and myriad of 10's more. God's Blessings! Straight to MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing, Sir!-Sylvia Frances Chan

interesting and sententious POD, congratulations Satish Verma-Alouwou Mandjah

Ancient Nemesis accept only the fallen grace (the avoided truth!)-Mahtab Bangalee

Concise expression. Excellent-Sanjibsaha Aniketa

Lovelyand makes interesting reading.-Kingsley Egbukole

Congratulations.
Your poem reflects a poetic spirit.-Poetic Poet

A concise and poignant verse, well conceived and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful work of art.
Thanks for sharing, Satish.-Chinedu Dike

Inseparable
the words will be buried
in tongue like nails. great expressions.. Congrata! ! ! ! dear Varma-Drtony Brahmin

Like you want to
meet the Demigoddess, before
you go in bloom..................................excellent metaphor...............full score-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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Poem Sublime

Thanks for the profound verse sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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September Woes

"a homeless word"
Nice ~allets

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Deciphering

A brilliant poetic expression, sir Satish.....10++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Earthly Claims

What an incredibly poignant piece.-elizabeth leone laird

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Jumping From The Surface Of Water

No shelter it seems. A glow in the ashes remains.-LAWLESS

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Playing With Marbles

A thought provoking verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Inquisition

Thanks sir for a poignant verse.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Animating Fear

Appears like the future has been captured in this verse and it serves also as a warning to humanity to mend ways...a relevant theme. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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No Complaints

Sunset was visible with amazing way. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Interesting reading. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing...-Kingsley Egbukole

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Travesty Of Truth

Beautiful reading. Love it...10.-Kingsley Egbukole

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Coming Full Circle

Kingly
This poem seems writ
As if upon the table of
Great philosopher king.-Dalton

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Virtual Images

Let it rise or fall, no difference in our concoction. No answer, no truth.
My apathy floats.
Burp!-James Michael

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Crying Silently

Deep feelings woven into this beautiful write...-Annette

Beautiful poem-Uma natarajan

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Leaves Are Changing Colors

An outstanding piece......Bernard F. Asuncion

This poem is as close to perfection as it could be!-Kostas Lagos

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Broken Bridges

An intriguing yet very profound write displaying the essence of the turmoil of thoughts in a distressed mind. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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O Trinity

poem of the poems.........ten out of ten.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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At The Beginning

At the beginning seems to be the end... An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Verma ji, Venus flytrap, the carnivorous plant which traps insects with it's open book like leaves , needs a foot note. Very nice poem.-R R Gandikota, Kakinada

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No One Was Real

haunting ... images, sounds and emotions ... i like the use of the language ... what more can one ask of a poem ;)-Einstein Noodle

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Nonetheless

Observing reflection through mirror on the wall is very amazing definitely. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Giving birth and dying and life continues. Interesting reading.-Kingsley Egbukole

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Beyond Tomorrow

I Was Chuckling
I have a strange sense of humor - non-offensively - but this one made me read and re-read and there was evidence of mirth. ie, carpetbaggers in nirvana? Hmmm... I think :D - Lady A -allets

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White Shrouds

I Shivered
Thinking of "forbidden fruits" - allets

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Without Fear

Like you want to
meet the Demigoddess, before
you go in bloom..................................excellent metaphor...............full score-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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After The Harmony

World View
Used as stairs...know that truth. To be is to be employed as a stair - allets

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Taking Revenge

Beautiful poem. Very interesting to read...10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments and rating.-Kingsley Egbukole

Why you want to sell
a fake idea, wrapped
in tears of sunken eyes? ........................fabulous.............full score.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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Absolutely

Absolutely! But is it that easy? TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Serene Encounters

Love This Line
"...Your were not you in my every poem..." I read it twice as "You were not you.." nailed it the 3rd and 4th closer reads. A Satish flourish. Enjoyed. - allets

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To Be Human

So relevant, Sri Satish Verma.-Diamond

Out would Love the last stanza for what has been done to his identity here on MPS.-Diamond

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Behind The Glass

Fantastic write and beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading this one...-mikemezz

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History Of Pain

Images of pain well portrayed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Swift Descent

i like the religious references and how they are used...
and if the moon gets stuck we are in trouble...
with all the hate in the world and so much violence done in the name of God.
what the heck are we doing?
soon we will all sleep with the fishes...
j.-jacob erin-cilberto 

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How To Proceed

Tomorrow is another day.-James Michael

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Candle Burns In Colors

A hard hitting verse portraying the chaos around. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Truths well said! I agree with Annapurna.-Padmavathi, Khammam

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Violent Shaking

One can interpret this in various ways. The shaken baby syndrome, the unforgivable disciplinary shaking of an adolescent, or the tremors of one who has any of the many neurological diseases. Whatever my friend those who have been subject to the violent shaking some never coming out of it all I can say is that you have penned a masterful write here.-JacieStralkoDuca

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Help Me

Brilliant!-Ganesha Michael Shapiro

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Watching The Lethality

A hard hitting truth well portrayed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Meeting Nemesis

The World's A Stage
Stopping it and getting off is contraindicted :D be well Satish - allets

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Sea Salt

Wonderfully expressed. Beautiful Poem.-Weeping willow

Spectacular!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Unbendingly

hmm be true b 3 no butcher has ever scared me try to stay true speaking true word get u into more trouble than its worth at time what i learned wen asked to speak for certain thing nice write think your butcher should b fairy sprinkle sum good stuff on him ha enjoyed have good evening.-janetmcglone

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Smoking Candles

& " DONE " ! _______________OUTBACK

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I Remember

The scars should be removed from mind. A tender path should be followed soon. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

A well composed pragmatic poem......10++++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Stray Moments

I really like this. So much conveyed here with a minimum number of words. Why, indeed, cut the rose?-Willys Watson 

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Made On Earth

I love your unorthodox line breaks.-Aislinn Wilson

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Compelling Charm

A thought provoking one. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma

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The Man And God

The Man And God...
The narrative is well-crafted in three haikus. -Aniruddha Pathak

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The Man And God

The Man And God...
The narrative is well-crafted in three haikus.-Aniruddha Pathak

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Elusive Peace

I feel at home in this.-Jon Thenes

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New Questions

I - DON'T* - " KNOW " = ?-OUTBACK

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Who Answers?

Sooooo resonates.-Diamond

And surely gives me the inspiration to write. Thank you.-Diamond

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New Sports

Beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Beside The Truth

A perceptive poem, sir Satish......-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Because You Count

" INDELIBLE* - DEBT " ! . . .-OUTBACK

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Back And Forth

Life indeed is a miracle that goes back and forth in actions and memories. A profound read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Beautifully expressed Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Subject To Arguments

Satis,
A brilliant piece!-Laura

You are natural-RiverJordan

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Face Mirror

Wondrous affirmation for a bard -allets

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Ununderstood

An intriguing read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Subject To Arguments

Satis,
A brilliant piece!-Laura

You are natural.-RiverJordan

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Sunglasses Break

Interesting lines on destiny. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Wearing The Crown Of Thorns

A perceptive write, sir Satish.....10+++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Self-Portrait

A fantastic write and well penned. I really like this one...-mikemezz

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Resuscitation

Insightful lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Not To Annihilate

heart touching expression..................-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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Against The Tide

When the tears would wait
to bloom like hidden flowers―
under the steady rocks.

Not me, not you, were
aware of the rising moon,
between snow and sleet.-Diamond

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Inconsistency

In zero-reflux, I was
intimately involved―
with your pride.-Diamond

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A Suspended Rock

Very good write. I really liked this one very much. Your poems are always wonderfully written and a pleasure to read..Peace...-mikemezz

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The Moral Suicide

This touched me, personally. I cannot put a finger on it, but maybe because now i feel i am not alone after reading this.
Beautifully constructed. Thank you-Personal

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Virgin Defeat

" The distance increases
when you give a call
in valley of loud echos"
Profound conceptualization linked with spiritualism as also intimate memories and their thoughts.Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Strange Revelations

A perceptive write.......10++++-Bernard F. Asuncion

There is no doubt your poem has unusual masks. Straight out of unusual thoughts.-Robert M Smith

An intriguing display of turmoil of thoughts brought out by the memories of the departed dear one. Thanks for sharing an intimate life song.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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One Of Many Thoughts

GOOD - QUESTION* = ? . . . . . . . . . .-OUTBACK

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Opens Like Heart

Such a lovely verse Satish ji!
Simply beautiful! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Art In Dying

Sun gets ready to set and rise again. This is wonderful natural action. You have brilliantly penned this poem-Kumarmani Mahakul

Marvelous expression...................-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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For No Obvious Reason

A good write.-libra

Fantastic write and perfectly written...-mikemezz

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Escaping The Wait

" RENT* an EXISTENCE* " - 101* !-OUTBACK

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Flagellation

Death is true to every one. No one can change the scene of death at all. This poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Eclipsing

Such a beautiful verse Satish ji! Depth in meaning and lovely expression!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Cleaved Love

Beautiful verse Satish ji! The Depth in meaning and wonderful expression!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Love of a darker color and texture portrayed well. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Another Assault

The nature of things. Thanks as always for feeding my thoughts.-James Michael

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Clear As Water

A very nice poetic expression....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Different Versions

Sat... So much to digest here, but I find myself reminiscing of the “Cold War” days; chimps in space flight...ballistic missiles capped with 40 megaton warheads...the pawns used by the super powers of the world....then, maybe, a quieter way out instead of fire...I like...-ishmael

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Fantasies And Myths

Invisible yet visible...energies destroyed and shortened by incorrect choices ..dying to self and flesh is needed for healing ...choices ...makes one think.-Thoughts In Time

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Message from Allets

Life in a bubble with bombardment afield from select global sellers of everything in the future. Work on line, everything is service or movement of goods. Sound Orwellian 1994ish. Poverty abolished, everyone works. The new Nirvana - the air outside unbreathable, children by lottery depending on water availability - SCI-FY writer's vision.
.
Stay in touch SIT ~S~

JOKE TEE SHIRTS in a magazine: You know nothing about a woman until she is drunk and mad at you./ Another bottle of wine and no genie at the bottom. (I'll keep looking) / Be the kind of woman that when her feet hit the floor each morning the Devil says, "Oh crap, She up! / I wish I could drop my body off at the gym and pick it up when it's ready./ I haven't lost my mind...half of it just wandered off, and the other half went looking for it./ No offense, but I was raised to "take care" of my hudband
. Wash his clothes
. Clean the house
. Wear gloves
. Get rid of the body
. Act very sad at the funeral.-allets


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Getting Solace

Life is wonderful and rocks are too. Your poem has brilliance within and this brilliantly motivates mind of a reader.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Not Like Anybody

Sat...The first word that comes to mind is “WOW!”. So, the obvious query is, exactly who are you referring to in this marvelous write? My guess is “yourself”. If I am wrong, fill me in, but I don’t believe I am off the mark. The “mirror” seems to offer the obvious clue. You spew words with metaphorical genius. Nevertheless, as Inspector Clouseau would say, “the mystery is ‘sol-ved’”. A wonderful piece of poetry. -ishmael

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Engaging In Argument

vivid and tantalizing, very enjoyable read.-slithr

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What Are Future Games?

Sat...well...another world-class metaphoric collection of words this time tackling the sickness of war and killing. So well done. And where is the “God”/god?? Let alone the where and why. Disturbing. Really, really fine poetry. -ishmael

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Another Harbinger

Very nice. Please read my poem " Skinny-Dipping" . Thanks!-Belle Wassermeister

I was afraid of losing the truth.... marvelous-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

The beautiful mind shakes the night and we still hope for the next light. An amazing poem is beautifully penned.Kumarmani Mahakul

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Black Masks

God sleeps for eternity...... marvelous.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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The Descent

WAS* / IS */ OVER* / ANEW* ! ! !-OUTBACK

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Missing Words

A well composed poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Some Transcripts

" ? "-OUTBACK

No “?”.-James Michael

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The Nightmare

Look, the interesting thread in your write, an obvious nightmare (are you on something??...just kidding) is, as I have suffered through some weird ones myself, that each stanza wrings out the various unfolding scenes as they roll on in your R.E.M time. That’s why this piece succeeds. Another fine, albeit disturbing, work. Nice.-ishmael

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I Ask Nothing

This is magnificent, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

There was no miracle
to retrieve the third eye
from the hidden love.............brilliant.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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Pangs Of Truth

How long have you been doing this? This is not rhymey dopey stuff. .... this as well as others of yours ought to be collected and published. Deep and disturbing write. It takes a lot to move me to this serious of a comment..-ishmael

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We The Possessed

Myriad faiths, myraid beliefs...obsessed in one or the other form. A relevant poem. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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No One Survives

A perceptive write, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

An intriguing poem with it's last stanza, "
Reason has failed
The blach hole of human
mind sucks all the truths.
Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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When The Attack Comes

I have not read a lot of your work or even know the volumnity of it... but I really appreciate this piece the “tantra” allusion in the first stanza and the 100 lamp et al further along possibly from the gospel parables. Nice. High level stuff. This is New Yorker quality...-ishmael

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There Was No Prelude

I detect a hint of Dylan Thomas here, but I need to linger on this awhile.. I am interested. This is good ...goood.-ishmael

I'm letting this one sink in more.-JacieStralkoDuca

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The Dirty Beliefs

Timely.-James Michae

Absolutely beautifully written.-Alta H Mabin

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The Essence

Such a perceptive piece of work, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

" All the comings
and goings were vague
who will stand the ground."
An intricate life song, philosophical as also intriguing. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hurricane Lamp

An interesting story of the lamp... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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To Be Human

Ha! Very interesting, sir. I like the way you express your art.-Cascade

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Classical Entry

If this doesn't win, I'll be very, very. I dunno. mad.-nourayasmine

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Nostalgic Return

Hmm, interesting portrayal of nostalgia... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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My commitment

Interesting commitment. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Divine Revelation

Through awakening we should perceive the new horizon of life. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Mystic Paths

This is excellent, sir !-Cascade

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Don't Touch The Black Sun

Hope has no flesh in the black sun and we should not touch. You have penned an excellent and wonderful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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I Will Speak

Very good poem, Varma Ji-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Good, found at least a way to release the locked up emos...TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Nothingness

Were you loyal
to humanity? What was
religion of god? the religion of God. dear Satish Verma, you are redifining God and religion with this simple question. thank u dear .. -Drtony Brahmin

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Avatar

though forgetting self
but the revelation
yeah; its pull the self out to the.........../// wonderful expression.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Truth Hides Behind Sun

Profound and very well penned. I really like this one very much....Peace..-Mike Mezz

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Deceiving Self

Learning any art with responsibility is important. Death is truth and learning this art is also excellent...10-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Arts In Telling

A question is always a question. An answer is never an answer.-James Michael

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Some Rehearsals

Perfect!-James Michael

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Believing In Myths

Arrival of spirit is noted by time. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Against The Tide

amazing thoughtscape
There is a world "between snow and sleet" - beauty indeed lives here. -allets

This is beautifully written, sir.-Cascade

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The Blessings Fail

Redefining and finding.-James Michae

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Unwritten Affair

Stretching from the extraordinary to a prison of ordinary!
Superb piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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As If Life Has Stopped

 pray for a swift death
I supose there will be long harshness and real prayers for pain's ending.-allets

This is a fine expression of artistry-Cascade

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Sacred Horse

In depth lines... TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor

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By Grace

Enjoyable. Tell us more.-eleven_eleven

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Searching Peace

Paradox always wins?-Ronnie Washington

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Straight From Dark

AH ! HIDE & SEEK* ! THE ATTEMPTED - MEASUREMENT* of ETERNITY* = ( MAYA ) ! . . . . . . .-OUTBACKS

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Incompleteness

we all hurt,sometimes-word_man

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No Epilogue

sense the depth in this piece..
I lack the context though, to understand.-Thomas S I

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Sell The Mocking Birds

Perhaps selling the mockingbird is a more serious offence than ' killing' it! Explosive write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Courtesies

Intrigue of intrigue
I never know quite what to say. I just keep reading you everyday. And I always reread what you've had to say.-Morningglory

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Fall In November

Profound lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor

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The Crescent Moon

A streak of light breaks the myth and The Crescent Moon motivates poetic mind. An excellent poem is well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Myths Of Ariel

Deep.
gravity the cause of our demise,
pulling and dragging us down
to look into its eyes
bring us down to it's size.....
life.-Faizel Farzee

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Not A Dream

i have to come back and read many time to understand this one. i will leave comment soon-Truth Bringer

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Being Alone

sometimes the journey is not important-Truth Bringer

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Did I Ask More?

A retaliation of sorts, elegantly expressed!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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In Denial

Amazing.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

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This Panorama

Blatant expressions of the darker side. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Sisyphean Ambition

Thanks for devoting this poem to the memory of Sisyphus.-Rajnish Manga

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Motionless

A short but most intimate trip down the memory lane. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Not Like Anybody

I really like this free form verse. Short, but deeply moving.-Willys Watson 

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Preternaturally

A painful and disheartening themed poem!
An exceptional write as always!-Laura

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Proclaming

i am loving the line fishing in an aquarium was prohibited. how are you coming up with strokes of genius?-Truth Bringer

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Real Me

Wonderful sense of mystery and poetic majesty and secret.-Julia Luber

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Exodus

An Exceptional write...
as always!
There’s always a price...
to live one’s life!-Laura

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At The End Of Game

The fools create their drama
they offered me free entry and participation
I kindly deferred their offer, said I had prior arrangements
they said you must come for its all about you
but you know me not, I replied in earnest, for indeed they don't
don't know any of you from Adam and I don't care to know
oh!, never mind that, they replied...we made it all up
we're good at fabricating, distorting and creating fake news
and so its our drama and we'll have it, with or without you
Do whatever you like, I said to them
I do not have the requirements or qualification to participate
in a Fools Drama by Fools.........-Yenson I Can't.....

Love...
I hear your words
And my heart feels
How I wish love was always real!-Traveler

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I Will Write A Poem

Congratulations I really enjoyed this.-Star

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Every Moment

Time has the
wings of golden eagle. It
flies on the peaks of thoughts - candid shot. An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Convulsions

Death is a natural process. It comes on way. Death is truth for all. This is a very brilliant poem well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Your Tresses Of Night Shade

When we meet at the end of the road, may our faith not be separated by ‘the headstones’! May we be enriched by that ‘bronzed man’!-Laura

Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and accept everything.-dusk arising

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Miracles Happen

Life is definitely athe poet's best muse ! Beautiful!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Uprooting Dandelions

Interesting
Intriguing title.
Poem blew my mind.-vjochum

dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory

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Opening A Window

Oh, I love this. It’s brief and haunting and real.-Hyacinth 

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The Solemn Pledge

First two stanzas: portrayal of an immense space and fleshless- ness!
A truly wonderful take on spiritually!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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The Land Pulls

An exceptional write as always!
Accepting our failures as well as we do our accomplishments...
is an accomplishment!-Laura

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Crucifixion

Violence read between the lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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On Naked Paper

A perceptive poetic expression, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Dwarfing

We have become stupid with our pursuits. The sculptor creates art, where others fail to grasp its beauty.

I just never know where my mind will go when I read your poetry. Poetry being the key word. Something lost at times in this chat room which I selfishly enjoy.-James Michael

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By Any Reckoning

I have been away for a year but I clearly remember your poems back then. I am surprised to read this one where all of the stanzas coherently make up the poem and the title made sense in relation to the content. Not to dismerit the older poems because I have seen your craft from them but to appreciate this approach you now take. I think capturing that grasshopper moment was great and the poem is beautiful.-mossgirl19

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Sacred Steps

Beautiful verse Satish ji! Loved reading it! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Seeking Peace

Make my life ephemeral is amazing to counter pain through organic love. A brilliant poem is excellently penned....-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Coding An Ocean

Pure genius.-Johnny Lawless

Excellent my friend!-Duenna Leya

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Escaping The Wait

Great New Word
"yestersins" :D-allets

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Pangs Of Truth

This poem has an interesting melancholy tone. I like your word choice here: Meet me in some moonless night./I will show you a slice/of my bruises", as if the absence of the moon became the "slice" of light that was pulled down from the sky to reveal the wounds shown. Curious to hear about what inspired this!-Kay 

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Last Dawn

People seem so busy with the hustle and they miss out. Tardy spirits? More like laid back spirits to take in everything. Looking at everyone’s hustle and no time to relax and see what there is to see? That’s what I got from your work. Awesome-Teresa

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Embracing Dark

In the morning
I will unlock the moon
to go back its home......wonderful ideology. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

" The moon flowers
are in full bloom, opening
at dusk till noon"
Wonderful conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Whom To Sing

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Whispering Clouds

A mystical write about whispering clouds and unblinking as we look at the clock! Nice imagery.-Aqua Flower

We have heard the whisper of cloud after reading your excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing thiis.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Uprooting Dandelions

dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory

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Selling Features

To Be Proven
Untouched truth - allets 

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Some Hegemony

rock carving
What poets do - allets 

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Forked Tongues

Mellow Mellow Mellow
"different paths" is a theme for me this year - good one,-allets

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Into Dark Abyss

Strange sense of detachment from emotion except for what is created by huge natural bodies like the moon.-Julia Luber

Fading jasmines spark less fragrance but moon motivates to regain strength. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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In Nostalgia

Why not indeed!-Laura

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You Walk Like Moon

Love the language used.-Aurora RW

A subtle parallel- linish undercurrent in the entire write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Why Camouflaging?

Cutting!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Art In Pain

Washing body in tears of devotion and emotion is definitely very nice. This poem is interestingly.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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The Hidden Sky

I love this and find it refreshingly original.-Willys Watson

oooh love the metaphors very clever. well done love it-Julie McCarthy (juliesp

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Brief Answer

Great. Is this a contemporary take on some of the wonderful Saivite poems I used to read? If so, it's wonderful as well.-Miracle Beyond Me

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Searching My Voice

To float in scented sky we should float in dreams. This poem is very excellently penned. An excellent sharing is done really. -Kumarmani Mahakul

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Naked Truths

The fusion cracks. An amazing poem is wisely penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

A profound poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Where To Go

Brilliant and so resonates!-Diamond

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India Ink

Well said
"...waiting for the /unhappened to happen..." Well sent, well received. -allets

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A Paroxysm

Intricate expressions of loss and despair. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Such a beautiful poem Satish ji! Heart touching!-Giti Tyagi, Patial

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Strange Rivalry

Such aromatic lines. Enjoyed the spice in every line. -Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

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Inheritance

The ghost limb will slash the wrist to swallow pride. Humorously you have spoken wonderful thing. An amazing and brilliant poem is penned...-Kumarmani Mahakul

I did not get much out of this poem. Verse two was a bit problematic for me. This is not your fault. I might not be giving this its proper reading. -Luis Estable

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A Complete Contrast

Killing Myself
In small poems. I like this one-djtj

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Relics Of Words

Cosmic!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Prerogative

Absence of a person creates an aura of sorrow that hurts but when sun appears this creates an aura of love and beauty. This poem is very nice and excellent...-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Covered With Quills

Your closing stanza holds me captive...(Apparitions gather―to bid goodbye to the moon. A flame of the forest was due any moment.) Excellent!-MissSharon

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Falling Rubble

Masterful.-Johnny Lawless

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Arts In Telling

My muse became addicted to really bad substances and I have not seen him for years. The world is preying on him.-allets

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In Depression

Hello satishverma,
A powerful super write!
Keep writing.-FineB

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Summer Solstice

All desire that a butterfly should come and sit near them. You have very nicely penned this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Dark Circles

Repeating some hymns everyday is very nice. This act purifies life with beauty of personality. Thank you very much for sharing this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Straight From Dark

Skin Angels
Pain - something wrong or something overly used. -allets

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Living With Grace

A true picture mirrored. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Song Of The Sky

With the wonderful imagery moon is described as strawberry. This poem is definitely an excellent poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Being The Untruth

Brilliant write.-A-Anon

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Not Being With Self

Excellent, Satsih. Well crafted and beautifully painted.-S Olson

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Of All Time

Amazing poetic expression, sir Satish...10+++ -Bernard F. Asuncion

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Path Of Rising Star

Always the right words at the right time. Thank you.-Johnny Lawless

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For Heaven's Sake

A beautifully written poem..-Floreann Cawley

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Walking Away

Multilayered verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Learning You

An imaginative poem that puts all words in the garden flowering.-Jane Campion

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The Ire

Great poem. I think I'm going to have to read it a few more times to attempt to get it's meanings, though. Thanx; have a great day :) reality-reality1

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Learning You

An imaginative poem that puts all words in the garden flowering.-Jane Campion

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Unkindly

i like this... especially the opening stanza.-.mynoduesp

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Heart Searching

Absolutely, we need some soul-searching. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Bewitching

A bit pessimistic (I'm an optimist) but thought inspiring. The poem leads one to re-think on actions one perform in ones life.-Guruji 

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I Must Tell You

We meet to hurt each other
Well written. I especially like the last line-lizardking

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The Dumps

You just won yourself a big fan.-nourayasmine

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