LAKE SONG

A paraxysm of kaleidoscopic & prismesque grandiloquence. And that is truly bonafide poetic largesse . However,that said.....i have been interpreting Literary work for a loooooooooooong time ,sir, and because so, and with all due respect to your most abstruse writing style, i must say that aside from what appears to be an over-reach of Verbiage-4-Effect vernacular...that no two lines in any of the works i have read of yours thus far form any logical nexus,and because so, your poems are coming across as (YES) fancy, spiced, heavily garnished, mysteriously convoluted & quite colourful to boot. However, when it comes to the absolute most important element of any form of Creative Writing, which is SUBSTANCE...your work comes across as non-sequitur...Mind you, this is (IMO)and certainly should not be taken as personal, or of anything else than Literary overview....Be Well,sir.-Frank James Ryan, JR., New York



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* RETURN JOURNEY

nostalgic, wistful, beautiful!- Smita Tewari

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WHAT YOU SAID

I like the last two stanzas..- Sara Kendrick

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REASONING

nice pictorial pour from your pen...thanks-Raju Baruah

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KILLING ZONE

Great use of language here - I enjoyed it very much. - Philip Kirkland, Mexico

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WANDERER

Your lexicon continues to befuddle me, as i am placing earnest effort into de-crypting these cultural termonologies that are obviously blighting many of us here from understanding the crux of your messages,Satish. Sometimes simplex is best when abstruse convolutes....I am guilty myself, so i know what can happen when the attention to sophisticated termonology suddenly becomes grandiloquence...Good Luck & have a great weekend,my friend !- Frank James Ryan Jr

I have no idea of the deeper meaning of these Hindi thoughts, but I feel the depth of feelings here in beliefs that hold humanity dear... Mike

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Dear Sir, great Stanza, I really admire way you capture restlessness of human soul in your verse. Warm regards, - Nandkishore, Mumbai

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BLEEDING DAY

WOW..... I love your play on words.. Not only this poem, but your style.....:- JP[Jared Pickett]

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PRIDE OF VALLEY

Very strong images of life, death and destruction. Are you screaming here for peace in the valley of pride? Moving.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

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RESSURECTION

sir this poem is just mind blowingly good.............has a deep spiritual connectivity............great job sir................- Himabindu Vuddaraju, INDIA

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BREAKING FROM PAST

Well done enjoyed the read..- poet destroyer

This is very good. So sad. I hope you only embraced the mood for the poem. But, I enjoyed it. - Charles Henderson
 
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SLAIN ROSES

i know this should be a place to write an intelligent comment...and i would do just that, but your poems always leave me speechless...there are so many things at sight yet hidden in this!- Liliana Negoi, Romania

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A LIFELONG JOURNEY

deep write, LIKED THE BAD IMAGE IN SOME LINES, i MEAN THAT IN A GOOD WAY. - IRMA HOLE

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THE END

You're a bottomless pit of poetry my friend. Well done. Take care. - Peter Schlosser

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BLAST

Very sad, your words brings vivid imagery. Always Be Well, Carin' Spirit- Carin' Spirit

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THE INDOMITABLE

Lovely images. Liked this a lot. -Peter Schlosser

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