A paraxysm of kaleidoscopic & prismesque grandiloquence. And that is truly bonafide poetic largesse . However,that said.....i have been interpreting Literary work for a loooooooooooong time ,sir, and because so, and with all due respect to your most abstruse writing style, i must say that aside from what appears to be an over-reach of Verbiage-4-Effect vernacular...that no two lines in any of the works i have read of yours thus far form any logical nexus,and because so, your poems are coming across as (YES) fancy, spiced, heavily garnished, mysteriously convoluted & quite colourful to boot. However, when it comes to the absolute most important element of any form of Creative Writing, which is SUBSTANCE...your work comes across as non-sequitur...Mind you, this is (IMO)and certainly should not be taken as personal, or of anything else than Literary overview....Be Well,sir.-Frank James Ryan, JR., New York
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