Can you please explain the title?
I love this. The begining line is just amazing
and I like that some of this makes no sense
but at the same time, perfect sense.
It feels like some parts do not really fit in with the poem
but it seems like the whole poem is like that
and I like it.
"It was getting dark in Himalayas"
-- did you mean to write "*the* Himalayas", or was it purposfully left out?
Upon reading this a thirdfourthfifth time, I realise it does all fit together perfectly well and there is a brilliant story behind this, not just beautiful words.
This is brilliant and [.amazing.] - so poetic.
http://allpoetry.com/
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