SPLITTING

Satish a very emotional poem describing the deep feelings of loss and memories - and of course the "Why's". May your lovely lady watch over you and bring you peace. - Marcia Schechinger, USA

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THE TROUBLED FAITH

Satish a soulful poem of wandering faith as you wait for the "lilies" return and the sun to turn back in lifes favor. As always your verses intrigue me. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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ENOUGH

well written.... very good. - Michael J. Falotico

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SERENE REVENGE

Really splendid poem. - Paul Judges

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CRISSCROSS

Fantastic write - - had me enthralled from the first - - your quirky word-play makes one wonderful poem and am glad I caught this today - - thank you Sir...... greetings from - Fay Slimm


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MOLTEN TEARS

WOW Satish, good write.... How am I the first??? How honored am I!!!!..- Jared Pickett

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UNBELIEVING

its a nostalgic poem. shows the depths of your feelings.- seema chowdhury

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EXISTENCE

powerful, strong on the EXISTENCE !!!!! well done,..-POET * DESTROYER

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FLYING BEARD

Satish such talent exudes from your poems. A bold write of war and the extremties that lay with no breath as if "puppets" who have finished their act. A sad world when bodies and spirits are wasted. Excellent verse, as always :)-Marcia Schechinger

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THE RETREAT

really dark and very nice..i liked it very much - Anish Shrivastava

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MOODS

Satish,your first stanza ostensibly establishes a nexus of co-ordinated substance....However, you lost me...and i dare say most of us, after segwaying from the bigotry of endogamy into intimating that such activity be angelic, or seraphic? You then suddenly take us to the moon ,at night, for purification? Light? Yet you close by afternoon ....Moods is indeed an apropos title....as you cover many tones & settings in this very mercurial work. As i have always said, in my comments to you,Satish...diction is not your problem...it is application/placement of certain lexicon, parlance & what i consider to be some very prolix & grandiloquent vernacular that does not confluence well, and in fact convolutes the work to a point far beyond any averagely intelligent Reader's comprehesion.Also, in my opinion...the over employment of "effect" language takes away from some very creative & meritable phrasage you have conjured up. Just my opinion...Nothing personal,like i always say...Still think you'd be doing you & this site a tremendous service by utelizing the prelude to the poem box to offer some brief insight as to the piece we are about to read....Your Call...- FjR (Frank James Ryan Jr)

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CONNIVED

Love the words!! great blend... -Michael J. Falotico

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Puzzles

I'm horrible at giving criticism, but I love this.-breathinghosts

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FOGGING

This is excellent work, Satish- Paul Judges




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UPRIGHT MIRRORS

I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, - Carol Brown

Deep poem Verma, enjoyed,..- POET * DESTROYER
 
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FLAMES OF SONG

Good morning Satish your words tells us to wake up and live the best we can i found this thought-provoking this is a beautifully vers .Thank you for sharing and have a nice weekend-Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

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* VOICELESS

What a beautiful voice you have used to portray this tribute. Thank You.- Eli

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GOLDEN LEAP

Wonderful, in particular the imagery and then the impressions left from the first two-lined stanza. Thanks again. - Eli

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IN SLEEP

Your poetry appears to be as yet undiscovered here. You write beautifully, and with an inspiring breath of originality. -Eli

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*DEPRESSION

Deeply moving.- Eli

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FAREWELL

Enjoyed the read. A little sad but life can be.- Clay Ward

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WOUNDED PRIDE

Satish, a profound poem on violence. To some, the end justifies the means; through mayhem, lies and deaths in the name of religion. Superb write. Thanks.-Alan Yeoh Oon, Malaysia

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SANDPAPER

It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Satish. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, -Carol Brown
well done, enjoyed the readdddd!!!!!!!!!!!!,..- POET * DESTROYER

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THE VIGIL

well done, enjoyed, have yourself a nice one,..-P O E T * DESTROYER

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I AM THE LOVER

Satish, as alwsy, your images are impeccable. In this case of the moments after death when "..You rise from the ocean under twilight of winged stars". I am always in awe of your talent. :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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EXISTENCE

WOw, Satish. It's amazing how you are able to put together so many great images in few lines. -Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

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DARK CORNERS

I like this, how elegant and sophisticated-Laverne Pacquire, USA

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CARBON CHOKING

This is by no means that I'm trying to offend you, but I find it so hard to relate to what you are writing, the feelings that you felt, and the words that are used always kept me thinking too hard of - Sandie Angel

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REVERSIBLE

Wow, powerful poem! the imagery is really good, very nicely done. The last line is truly outstanding :) love and respect. lance. -Lance Lawlor

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ROCKS AND SKULLS

Very good, Satish- Paul Judges

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EMPTYING

really like this one !-Paul Judges

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YIELDING

enjoyed and well rhymed, nice one - P O E T * DESTROYER
Very good, love the flow of words - Michael J. Falotico

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Fixed Flux

you have a way with words.
and I like it -so poetic.
 
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Counting

Can you please explain the title?
I love this. The begining line is just amazing
and I like that some of this makes no sense
but at the same time, perfect sense.
It feels like some parts do not really fit in with the poem
but it seems like the whole poem is like that
and I like it.
"It was getting dark in Himalayas"
-- did you mean to write "*the* Himalayas", or was it purposfully left out?
Upon reading this a thirdfourthfifth time, I realise it does all fit together perfectly well and there is a brilliant story behind this, not just beautiful words.
This is brilliant and [.amazing.]- so poetic.

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Millennium Celebrating

seasoned write, The planks lick the salt of earth.

Lipless mouths cannot speak.
Departure of sun was blameless,
unanswerable to human wails. knightcall

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UNBELIEVING

its a nostalgic poem. shows the depths of your feelings.- Seema Chowdhury, Canada



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What Conclusion Was Left?

I rather like this; and I wish I had something more to say other than that, but I'm afraid I'm at a loss of words; but I just had to say something! This really is nice, and I love the emotion put into it. I do hope you have a lovely night.- Behindyouboo

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PEBBLES IN THE POND

a very compelling write, the words in this are just magic . like the last line "blood stained light", nice one -P O E T * DESTROYER

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WAIT

well done, enjoyed have your self a good one-P O E T * DESTROYER

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DEATH AND APOLLO

"you die in your own vision..." brilliantly expressed, satish. you do know how to set the cog wheels turning. regards,- C. McGovern-Bowen

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WOUNDED FLIGHT

a powerfully expressed journey herein, satish. - C. McGovern-Bowen

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IN REVERSE

'Just unbound, the death rate' soo wel writen with proper flow............-Anita Trivedi

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IN OUR BREASTS

very wel writen...............- Anita Trivedi

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ODE TO LONELINESS

i like, thanks for the darkie little deep write, enjoyed the end,..- P O E T * DESTROYER ??

building to such intense joy in so lonely a poem! amazing work! Satish! jimbo - James Marshall Goff
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SALT PLUNGED

A very heart touching poem from one who has most likely experienced this tragedy...Very sad indeed, the Lord have mercy on those barbarians for hell is waiting for them! Love and Peace, - Romeo Della Valle

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REASONING

Nothing lasts forever! The time will come when all these atrocities will end and then you will see children with an innocent pasted smiles again...Love and Peace,- Romeo Della Valle

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TRAILING WAR

A powerful and hardhitting poem that captures the agony and futility of war perfectly. :)- Susan Jarvis


"To witness the agony of man" is a powerful phrase indeed - - a strong and appealing verse.-Fay Slimm
 
Powerful. Your final line blistered.- Robert Ross
 
Excellent!- Dennis Go
 
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NO GRAND LANDING

Well accomplished, Satish-Paul Judges

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DISSIPATION

Yeba Deba Dew Dude this poem rocks-Fred Finstone

 I love this poem-Anik walia, USA

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TRAILING WAR

likes this poem.-Dennis Go

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RETURN ON D-DAY

ENJOYED THIS ONE THIS SUNDAY MORNING:) -IRMA HOLE

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BURNING IN

A uniquely compelling work. Seems so very doomed, a complete percept and concept of the negative. As for any light, or infact vessel, there must be negativity and positive also, itis just how it is. Any thing less is truly quite impossible in life :) smile, I found it to be a very good work though in the aspect of the author, feelings of fierceness, fury of disrespectful nature of your subject of inspiration. Humorously, quite the piece of art he/she must be to reflect one in this manner?- Lucinda Lu Price Cayton (Date: 5/1/2010 1:07:00 PM)

I have quite truthfully found in life, that circumstance can attribute many things within relations with humans, especially the opposite sex! I have shaken my head in wonderment, asking why God did not allow me to know an indivuidual at another time in life...? Maybe we never get to those other pages and chapters of an indidual's true book, yet they are there toiled just the same as our own. With all respect, to love one another, despite flaws, is just a good thing..-Lucinda Lu Price Cayton (Date: 5/1/2010 1:12:00 PM )

Excuse me, I have a bit of a taunting nature at times. My appologies. Truly couples that feel these ways about another, well, let's just say I hear tell of just as much of passion in all aspects. Maybe you need to perhaps own a little piece of how would you say, uh,.... perhaps wrongful intent, at a time or another. And what the heck, just live... I am sure you are not his/her only choice. If they are so vibrant, colors-hues. common sense, another will deeply appreciate. I do loathe bad endings- Lucinda Lu Price Cayton (Date: 5/1/2010 1:20:00 PM)

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GOLDEN END

This is the most horrid, truly pained poem I have ever read in my entire life!..... Please, do take great care, God bless you dear, in hopes you find comfort at some point in your life. It seems as though, someone has either known you for a very long time and purposely has just tried to destoy orunknowingly, has cut you to the point you are visibly bleeding heart and soul. I do not know you, but I will pray for you every time I remember this work, which honestly, will be the rest of my life. XO -Lucinda Lu Price Cayton

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AGE OF THE STRAW

beautiful poem,,,,Charma - charmaine chircop
Beautiful. - Amy Green

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RETURN ON D-DAY

ENJOYED THIS ONE THIS SUNDAY MORNING:) -IRMA HOLE

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LOSING AGAIN

"Unhear"?....You continue to architect what is actually beginning to look as if you cut out snipets of phrasage, put all the snipets in a box...shakegive the box a good shake , and begin pulling the one-liners out of the box & typing them onto the Create page in the order in which you pulled them out of the box....I don't mean to seem cruel, and again ,i don't know you, so i do not nor could not have any personal riff to chew with you....I am trying my best, as i know others are on this site , to comprehend any one of your posts....Why not start taking advantage of the pre-poem intro area & give us a little hint as to what you would like us to immerse in......Have a nice weekend....\\\FjR///- Frank James Ryan Jr, New York

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FAREWELL

THIS WORK REMINDS ME OF THE 'END TIMES'...AT THIS WORLD'S END...IT IS PROPHESIED TO BE TERRIFYING, INDEED! THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS-Joyce Bell

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TOO PROUD

SAD...BUT THEN...'A CINDER SMOULDERS'...AND AS LONG AS THERE IS LIFE, THERE IS STILL HOPE FOR....'FAITH WAS WALKING...' AND, WITH OR WITHOUT LEGS...IT STILL MOVES. WRITTEN WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR-Joyce Bell

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ONLY BEING

I DON'T BELIEVE THAT WE ARE EVER ALONE, SATISH...EVEN WHEN WE 'SEEM' TO BE. WE ARE UNIQUE BEINGS...EACH ONE OF US...WHO, AS LONG AS WE EXIST...WILL CONTINUE TO 'THIRST'...UNLESS, OF COURSE, WE DRINK T-Joyce Bell

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BY THE WORDS

Powerful writing, Satish- Paul Judges

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YOUR WAKING HEAD

rivetting!!-Sophia Choudhury

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AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

Stark images. Nicely done. -Peter Schlosser
 
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What Conclusion Was Left?

I rather like this; and I wish I had something more to say other than that, but I'm afraid I'm at a loss of words; but I just had to say something! This really is nice, and I love the emotion put into it. I do hope you have a lovely night.-ehindyouboo

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