"Unhear"?....You continue to architect what is actually beginning to look as if you cut out snipets of phrasage, put all the snipets in a box...shakegive the box a good shake , and begin pulling the one-liners out of the box & typing them onto the Create page in the order in which you pulled them out of the box....I don't mean to seem cruel, and again ,i don't know you, so i do not nor could not have any personal riff to chew with you....I am trying my best, as i know others are on this site , to comprehend any one of your posts....Why not start taking advantage of the pre-poem intro area & give us a little hint as to what you would like us to immerse in......Have a nice weekend....\\\FjR///- Frank James Ryan Jr, New York
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