SHAMEFUL

Congrats Satish on your featured pome this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. my friend.. with luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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LIKE A CHINESE LANTERN

Just wonderful FREE VERSE FORM...perhaps a tiny bit of different page layout would help. Do you what help labeling your verse forms? Soup mail me & I will help SUCH a good writer we must help each other to keep growing! My favorite lines "A chaste tree becomes a sage /and tenderness of the ash turns into an elegy./ The moon-face has frost on the eyes./Tears blaze the lips."- Deborah Guzzi, Date: 8/28/2010 5:50:00 AM


Very alluring write that seemed to have a surprise ending..Keep the creative writing flowing so that we at PoetrySoup will have the pleasure of reading your words.-Sara Kendrick, Date: 8/28/2010 5:53:00 AM


well written and great observation skills. I watch a special on Mark Twain and he had great observaton skills and became a great writer and entertainer.-Doris Culverhouse, Date: 8/28/2010 6:42:00 AM


Beautiful poem, Satish:) I just love Chinese lanterns...'Tears blaze the lips'- this line is just terrific. I am truly impressed. Emily.-Emily Roxana, Date: 8/28/2010 11:38:00 AM


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खामोश रंग

bhut achha andaz sir aap ka bhut achhe word use kiye hain.- kishan 


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BIRTHDAY

and i found theses lines very interesting.. "Lonely home inspires the dark bird to land on the window of mountain walls. "- Reshma Jacob, India


liked the last three lines- Reshma Jacob, India


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WALKING WILDERNESS

Satish I never tire of reading your work, your images, your emotional metaphors. A poet of extreme talent with a brilliant mind I thank you for continuing to grace us with your verses. Even with the disharmony that dwells in the piece, it fits your style and you longing to find peace both in yourself and in the world; and to help others do the same. Thank you Satish for sharing :)- Marcia Schechinge, USA


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REMEMBERING

A lovely poem, Satish Verma.- medhini 


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BEAUTIFUL

sounds sad...distraught.- Doris Culverhouse

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TIME TO ANSWER *

very stunning write, yet very sad too. Diogenes- Diogenes Zuniga, Date: 8/5/2009 8:52:00 PM


Smile? ~ Just another amazingly stirring and captivating write by an extremely beautiful soul!!! ~ "Hello Dear Lovely, Profound And Gifted Satish Verma" ~ Again, I wished to make a special stop here at Soup away from the crowd that I amy visit "Your Wonderful Light" after viewing "Your Brilliances" post this morn dear lady and, to ask "You" why "You" have never stopped by, to at least say hello unto myself? ~ - John Rhinem, Date: 8/25/2010 7:17:00 AM


Smile ~ "I Love 'Your Beautiful Verse Satish;'" for it is but this sincere and compelling reflection of such a beautiful again, heart and soul ~ One which it seems perhaps, has endured such an uncomfortable and sorrowed environment possibly, brushing against the beauty inside of themselves; tainting and to some degree perhaps, stealing away from they, the glow amid the world wherein they have lived and have come to perceive and to know?! ~ - John Rhinem, Date: 8/25/2010 7:23:00 AM


Smile ~ It is not my dream to be surrounded by many here at Soup but, to be sooo very blessed, to know that "You" are a part of my world here would, make my heart rejoice with joy I believe!!! ~ Thus, I am deeply hoping that "Your Beauty" shall find it within "Your Precious Heart" to allow myself to be a part of "Your Beautiful Souls World" here at Soup!!? ~ It would be an honour to myseld for, "I Consider 'Yourself' To Be 'A Priceless Treasure' Dear, 'Beautiful Satish Verma!!!'" ~- John Rhinem, Date: 8/25/2010 7:30:00 AM

Smile ~ I am going to be logging out of here after posting this last com to "Your Majesticness Dear" for, I have things to do and yet, I am soo very deeply hoping that I shall hear from "You!!!" ~ "Astonishing Poem Soo Gripping; A Fave" ~ "My Love And Warmth To You Always, And 'All You Love,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed And Beautiful of Days Dear, 'Amid The Arms Tranquilities Love;" Bye Beautiful Satish!:) ~- John Rhinem, Date: 8/25/2010 7:39:00 AM

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FURY OF JUGGLER

It is FREE VERSE dear..and a good one too! Loved the "all seeing eye imagery!" and the throw back at the end to is man god or is god man? Light & Love-Deborah Guzzi

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WINDOWS

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Liana Margiva

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UNEATEN FRUIT

Sage like work. 
So many gifts, but do we ever use them or even realise that which we have.- Andy Turner

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SOFTNESS

Tantalizing and refreshing through a unique perspectiv... - Karen Palumbo

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UNDERSCORING

Excellent contrasts. Great poetry once again as always. -Peter Schlosser

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IN RING OF FIRE

The night has forgotten a Mozart.The 
magic flute will not play again. 

Sadly, that is also the way I feel things are, Satish. Love and peace to you, - Regis Auffray

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WHAT COMPARISON ?

No thank God!!- Doris Culverhouse

Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write..- (Destroyer ((Poet

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SCARS OF LIFE

Satish unfortunately I think none get to leave without scars. An emotional poem of time, unwanted knowledge, and wasted moments and memories of life. With your insightful poems of inner self, the readers become more attuned with their own thoughts. Your deeply moving style is always a gift to read. Thank you :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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जो मैंने सब नहीं पढ़ा

सवाल पूछना आसमान को जोखिम
में डालता है
बादल रोयेंगे नहीं…bhut achha andaz aap ka varma shaab...-kishan


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WINDOWS

Satish, You have written a profound piece. Many thanks for sharing. Kind regards and may you enjoy peace as you gaze through the windows in your own life.- Roy Kneale, UK


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ONE SAINT WALKED OVER THE RIDGE

Ps. Smile ~ I am going to fave this amazing and gripping poem "Dear Satish," along with "Your Brilliant & Majestic Self;" if this I have failed to yet do? ~ Smile, "May Your Beautiful Soul Be Embraced Amid The Warmth of Love, Forevermore;" Bye Again!:) - John Rhinem

Smile ~ "You Are Soo Amazing Satish; Your Verse Is Soo Deep & Profound" that, although I am just commenting on the gentlemen now, I had to stop for You ~ Smile, "Brilliantly Bright You Are" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & to All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful & Blessed Tomorrow Dear;" Bye!:) ~- John Rhinem

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अजन्मा

काफी अच्छा लिखा है..! एक एक शब्द में व्यंग छलकता है..!- amit478874


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the Walls

Love second stanza the best, but the whole poem is beautifully written and the descriptive words really put flesh on the bones of this piece invoking great imagery. Well done- DieingEmbers

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ANOTHER CREATION *

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Satish. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love,- Carol Brown

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विषदन्त

सतीश जी बहूत अच्छा लिखा हैं | - virenraja830


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THOUGHT ON THOUGHT

There is power in every word you bring to life and there is a force that accompanies each stanza. I remain in a fixed state of awareness after reading your compositions; arrow true they hit the bull's eye! One must give an honest account of self and their surroundings when entering your world of keen observation, both sweet and bitter; the living in mourn as well. Your astute delivery plays tag with the clouds on a day sure to sent showers that arrive when least expected. I applaud you with
each reading of your literary works as it can be mind boggling as one searches for the right  combination of expressions to convey the heartfelt emotions leading from pen to pad! I sir, do object to the ungodly behavior of mandkind and it's false ego. Thank you for your many writes of great quality and humanitarian gesture. You are poetry and a gentleman above the best of the best!- Dreaming Dreams


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मस्तिष्क-मृत्यु

मस्तिष्क-मृत्यु”"”" बहुत अच्छा प्रयास …-kishan


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A NAME OF CLEMENCY

What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Satish. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love,- Carol Brown

great thoughts... be proud of the years!- Doris Culverhouse

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विपरीत

अच्छी कविता..बधाई- अभिषेक सागर


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WHY

A sightless vista opens before the
inward eye. I take hold of a brush
and wipe out the faces.,,,aap ke vichar bahut sundar hain sir..- kishan


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INDIVIDUALLY

Satish your images really excel in this melancholy verse of tears and "mute songs" where the stillness of war and death have left us soundless. Thank you for always displaying your gift of writing and consideration of the real world.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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SOFTNESS

A nice poem with deeper meaning
though not fully understood, Satishji.
stars :****- medhini


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INVISIBLE PARTICLES

Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

well penned...you have me thinking and getting inspired to write!! Thank you!-Doris Culverhouse

Another great write Satish from your gifted pen.. enjoyed your creativity today..with luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..I especially like the next to last triolet..Keep the creative metaphoric pen flowing.- Sara Kendrick


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WHY

Nice thoughts shared . thnx for posting it. - sana

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THOUGHT ON THOUGHT

I thought I could understand this


but no…..

Too difficult.-Vishvnand
 
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THOUGHT ON THOUGHT

Satish Beautiful works very inspiring and the relief of wakening and discovering ,Thank you for sharing.- Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

Captivating! esp the lines "will fill
up my glass, and my shadow
will sit beside me and we will drink the
pain"- sana

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ALL I UNREAD

how long do you expect to live?;)- jenks

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CHARITY

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love,- Carol Brown

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पत्तियाँ

great….aap ne jivanki vastvikta batayi he ..acha laga sir!!!!!!!- kishan


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TERRACOTTA

Satish, a rich, moving verse in a style unique to you. Polished and professional was this to enjoy.-Nancy Crossland, USA


Satish I am always astounded how each of your poems are so different, yet bring out so much emotion for the reader. Thank you for being a writer :)- Marcia Schecinger, USA


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THE CALLER

whoa...enjoyed...not sure I understand but thats ok- Doris Culverhouse

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IT DOES NOT MATTER

~ "Reflection of A Very Beautiful & Strong Heart Soul; Blessed!!!" ~ Never let this be for, All things matter and, "You," I can very deeply tell, matter immensely so!!! ~ The Angels of "God In Heaven," I am certain smile when they behold "Your Light" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Shine Bright Blessed Satish &, Have A Very Beautiful Day;" Bye!:) ~- John Rhinem

Smile ~ "Hello Dear Satish Verma" ~ First I believe that I need to apologize to "Your Dear" for, if I remember correctly I called "Your Preciousness" Verma instead of Satish? Please, forgive myself for such an error and yet, I meant every word which I said unto Your Giftedness amid that com!!! ~ I hope that You are doing wonderfully this day and, I do love Your writing; this ~ ....Cont:)- John Rhinem

Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Satish. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love,- Carol Brown

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BY THE WORDS

I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Satish. Love, - Carol Brown

Satish, this is a wonderfully written poem~ why would you consider it in the category of ~I Do Not Know~ this is a narrative_as you are telling us a story~ or even free verse, as it is verse without rhyme~ I normally do not even read poems labelled I Do Not Know~ but I very happy today I read this one~~- ~ A Rambling Poet ~

~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear Verma Satish;" Bye!:) ~- John Rhinem

Smile ~ "Intense, Well Thought Out & Presented Verse Dear Verma Satish" ~ You know, I have been reading all of "Your Amazing Poems" dear lady as of late and, I am sorry I have not comed before now but, I admire "You" and I love "Your Gift!!!" ~ I believe that I and many would be very well served to take heed to words spoken from "Your Precious Heart" ~ Smile, "Yes, 'You Are Very Rare!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)- John Rhinem

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LIFE’S TOAST

Satish with your creative talent you never disappoint the reader, as you delve into the sorrows and "secrets of judgement" that disavow the peace in our life when "tragedy overwhelms the path!". Thank you for sharing your works. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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एक बार

loved it -- prachi sandeep singla


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जल-प्रलय का शोक मनाते हुए

what imagery,,wow -  prachi sandeep singla


बाउंसर…..
ऊपर से निकल गयी.- dp


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QUEST

I can`t see well what this poem refers to. There are several passages in it that I am not sure of and this the reason I gave it a seven. I think, in my humble opinion, that this piece needs some clarifiction in some of its diction. 
This poem strikes me as one meaning more to the one who wrote than to the reader. I might be wrong, but after reading this piece three times I came away with that conclution. 

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CIRCLING

cover adeeper thought/ notice the spill of words and the bucket expanding the purple bruises to be lost in the sea of names.words words- Jabberm Alessawy


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ADAM’S MEND

Enjoyed your poem,.- (Destroyer ((Poet

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SONG OF BLUE

enjoyed reading today!! Purple guilt? good line.- Doris Culverhouse

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कहीं नहीं जाना

ohh god kitna dard hai kavita me…!

bahut acchchhi likhi gay hai!- Ravi Rajbhar

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ZERO HOUR

true colour of death.........- premji premji

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A BOMBER UNSPEAKS

Satish a blundt poem of the mixed philosophy of the "bomber" what could be such a vision as great as that "...some rare vision was giving the push". A poem where one wonders how a heart and soul could be so broken as to create such travesty. Thank you for your talent :)- Marcia Schechinger


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