Just wonderful FREE VERSE FORM...perhaps a tiny bit of different page layout would help. Do you what help labeling your verse forms? Soup mail me & I will help SUCH a good writer we must help each other to keep growing! My favorite lines "A chaste tree becomes a sage /and tenderness of the ash turns into an elegy./ The moon-face has frost on the eyes./Tears blaze the lips."- Deborah Guzzi, Date: 8/28/2010 5:50:00 AM
Very alluring write that seemed to have a surprise ending..Keep the creative writing flowing so that we at PoetrySoup will have the pleasure of reading your words.-Sara Kendrick, Date: 8/28/2010 5:53:00 AM
well written and great observation skills. I watch a special on Mark Twain and he had great observaton skills and became a great writer and entertainer.-Doris Culverhouse, Date: 8/28/2010 6:42:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Satish:) I just love Chinese lanterns...'Tears blaze the lips'- this line is just terrific. I am truly impressed. Emily.-Emily Roxana, Date: 8/28/2010 11:38:00 AM
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