Unabused

Is life a blazing desert? Is there the scorching sun? Finally what do we achieve? I like to think on these terms and enjoy what you wrote.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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RANDOM BIRTH

The boat named desire tosses with the waves of tempest and heading towards the infinity! A palm tree wearing the mask of History..........a golden line of the immortal souls?-nimal dunuhinga

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LAKESCAPE

Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

Beautiful write for this Sat. morning...thanks for sharing.....-Michael J. Falotico

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FREEDOM AT LAST

It hurts but is cleansing to look at ourselves and take note of what we need to improve upon..Enjoyed reading your work..-Sara Kendrick

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

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Haiting to do

"Trading abuses when love was lost,

the ancient tribe plays a game." how true ... Thanks. - Kalyan, Hyderabad

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FREEDOM AT LAST

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,- Carol Brown

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A LASSO

Are these 4 seperate quatrain style works....or are they supposed to be a nexus to a one specific storyline....I initially swore not to ask....but so i did.....Can you explain?...I appreciate esoteric work.....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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AGONY

well stated in this flowing composure of thought! -Doris Culverhouse

 

I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Satish. Love, -Carol Brown

 

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AMAZING

Satish,
I feel more reading needed on this one.
“The cobalt was emitting radiation” – you use “cobalt” again. It’s damaging effects seem more than to the physical.
“A child in polythene, O golden god
you have killed the man by giving him
the gifts. The sand-pit, I am buried
alive in it before I understood.” – very striking imagery – man let loose in the playground of possibilities without havbing the attainment of a disciplined mind through growth. -Gion Gion

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Subdued Laughter

Satish Verma saheb, your style is unique so are the images. Though I do not understand your poem from the first line to the last, I get a feel of it and do enjoy. Thanks.-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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CRISSCROSS

Satish "...A landslide wanted to know Who was to be blamed?..." the crying of the earth for care and peach. As always for you, I marvel at your precise intellectual wording to make you points to the reader. Thank you for sharing your marvelous poetic skills with us Satish. :) -Marcia Schechinger

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INTELLECT

it feels interesting while i read your poems …you pore a deep sense of thoughts bundled with what we just known of like words…very nice..sir ..hope to see more of this kind..-Abhi Tamrakar

loved it sir-rajdeep

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DAY DREAMING

Very imaginative and interesting flight of the day dreaming, Satish -Dr.Ram Mehta

 

I don't like to use the word love too much for it makes it become less meaningful but here I would have to say that I love this one..Very exquisite wording..- Sara Kendrick

 

poignant yet an eloquent read, satish.. wonderful! warmest, - nette onclaud

 

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TERRACOTTA

Profoundly intense Satish and ranks with any classic in poetic mastery of metaphor.-Fay Slimm

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A lasso

A great deal of story therein, told in a masterly way, with an apt title. Kudos Verma.- Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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REVELATION

The flesh sends upright signals to release the soul - nice philosophical expressions you have penned so well, Satish- Dr.Ram Mehta

Enjoyed reading today!-Doris Culverhouse

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UNCHARTED SELF

best piece..and sitting in the graveyard…- vestailg

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विदाई

सर जी बहुत ही बढ़िया लिखा है आपने बधाइयाँ |- Abhi Tamrakar

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REVELATION

Enjoyed reading today!- Doris Culverhouse

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RETURN OF THE POET

 WOW! [ I avoid using the expression, generally! ] 
What a poem! [ That, I know is no way to express one's critical opinion1]- Sharad Rajimwale


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* THE DEAD TIGER

Deep poem very well written on seeing death the mind as a poet can bring metaphors alive as an Haiku of mine said...The Dead Tiger +++++10 regards- Ken E Hall


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* VOICELESS

Such powerful, poignant words. 
Crisp and tight, a parallel voice of black stars talks to sky, - 
A simply brilliant use of metaphor and a wonderful poetic tribute. Again, humbling.

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* THE DEAD TIGER

What a marvelous poem. I love everything about it and am humbled by it. Your poetic expression through your great command of the English language, the wonderful metaphors you use and the pictures you paint with words are simply breathtaking.- Bert Bell


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STRIKING PORTRAIT

Satish a beautiful image in this melancholy verse of sleepless nights and early dawns. "...sunlight starts flirting with a dew drop on a wet rose...", a breath of eternity gives one hope for peace and understanding lifes pain. As always Satish, I deeply admire your work. Thank you- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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MEDITATION

May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry this beautiful Sunday afternoon and thank you for sharing it Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

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A MONUMENT

Satish as always I am mesmerized at your talent and wonderful metaphoric usage to get points across. When studying creative writing, the student knows because of the different issues and variety of minds that just like abstract art each piece has a different meaning for each of us. I thoroughly enjoy that in your work and wonder how my reflection on your poem matches the slides behind the words. "...I had run after a dream The frills of your gown caught fire...", great line. Thank you so much for sharing your work Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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CONTEMPORARY

Beautiful craft with skilled word-artist. Beautiful indeed. I will remember long the illicit love of twilight and blue summer. Thank you.- Pranab k chakraborty

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DARK FEET

Brilliant work! Well done- Taha Effendi

this is a beautiful write...well done..- Tobey Hill

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A nice poem, Satish.- medhini


Satish,
I liked the imagery even with the dog thrown.
“A classless pain rises fiercely
I am careless about my height
amdist tall peaks.” – I particularly like this as it reminded me of something long ago.
I find the style of your poetry increasingly holding my attention but struggle for the meaning even when I think I understand the imagery,- Gion


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DIVINITY WITHOUT

Hello Satish: Reading your poem brings the horror of war into my room this morning and makes me know that I do not ever want to experience it first hand. Paul Rainwater jr., USA


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NESTLINGS

Liked the last 2 stanzas a lot- very hard hitting and well written- renu rakheja


The black needles will stitch the wounds of sun.
Very nice and as Renu said, hard hitting indeed!-  parminder


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HAPPENED

I could to some extent pick up the deep philosophy behind this poem....great poem.....- sathyanarayana

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OF LANGUAGE

Satish,
I like this poem’s imagery. When I read it I found an immediate attraction to it.
Fergus
“An endless journey for the
bleeders in labyrinthine life
of yes and no.”-Gion Gion


Language – so many sounds and syllables until filtered through mouth and ear.
The idea of eruptions is great.- Gion Gion


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NESTLINGS

Liked the last 2 stanzas a lot- very hard hitting and well written.- renu rakheja


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*खरे दर्पण

खरे दर्पण !
बिल्कुल खरे सर !
हमेशा की तरह !

बधाई !!!- Harish Chandra Lohumi

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SMOKING CANDLE

Wonderful imagery here. I thought of several options, but finally settled with the volcanic eruption.... Thank you- Don

A very touching poem only you can write- JVL NARASIMHA RAO

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DISCLAIMER

Satish with breath taking blundt and bold metaphors you have given the reader a challenge of peace. From childhood to adult who owns the sins of war, "the trees of words" - perhaps. I am hoping the 'high' off of this particular "party" will end soon. Your words have been missed, my talented friend. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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DELICATE BALANCE

a great beauty..the last line is terrific..-Barbara Gorelick

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BACKTRACKING

such a sad note in this poem. I'm not in that mood today, but I enjoyed your poem.-Charles Henderson

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White house

And let fly the silence
in beautiful emptiness
of a swollen heart.. 

I loved the poem. Very nice one.- Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Contemporary

And you want to hold the seasoned wave! Poets have strange imagination. I enjoyed it, Sir.- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur


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IT OPENS

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this beautiful morning Satish. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. May your day be full of inspiration. Love,- Carol Brown

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COUNTING

Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Satish. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love,-Carol Brown

Interesting thoughts penned.-Sara Kendrick

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AFTER SUNSHINE

Satish,
“Tear down the curtain.
Let me sea the face of death.
I have a long debt to pay.” – liked these kines.-Gion


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HALLUCINATION

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, -Carol Brown

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

Satish "the palace has broken" a wonderful way to metaphorically start off this poem. It can have different meanings varying on country and life circumstances, but it surely says "Who Was Faithful" and followed the "light". Thank you, with wonderful symbolic melody, your poems are always amazingly talented and insightful. :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA

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…… Distant Shores

Very nice indeed. Beautiful use of descriptive language and metaphor.-Bert Bell

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* VOICELESS

Such powerful, poignant words.
Crisp and tight, a parallel voice of black stars talks to sky, -
A simply brilliant use of metaphor and a wonderful poetic tribute. Again, humbling.-Bert Bell

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* THE DEAD TIGER

What a marvelous poem. I love everything about it and am humbled by it. Your poetic expression through your great command of the English language, the wonderful metaphors you use and the pictures you paint with words are simply breathtaking.- Bert Bell

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PICTURES

Satish,
a wonderful set of verses, very impacting,
Gion
“What you did not know
was my pain.
When I felt illumminated
in dark.”- Gion Gion

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TORCHES

Satish,
this is a haunting piece.
Gion
“I want to close the window,
as the white dove was carrying
dead leaves for a mass grave.”- Gion Gion

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SMOKING CANDLE

A very touching poem only you can write - JVL NARASIMHA RAO
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BLEEDING

A strong poem like a herbal porridge! My salutation Sir!- nimal dunuhinga
words are getting mutilated.... very powerful...- premji premji
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White house

And let fly the silence
in beautiful emptiness
of a swollen heart.. 

I loved the poem. Very nice one.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

 

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SMOKING CANDLE

A very touching poem only you can write- JVL NARASIMHA RAO

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FAINT WRITING

Satish again I read your work and am mesmerized as I read the metaphors and the twists of word usage that create an image. Not just an image, but a tidal wave of thoughts and pictures of life and nature combined to create a marvelous work of art. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work, Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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HUBBLE TURNS 20

Satish,
a wonderful poem. I’ve read it over and over.
I remember when the Hubble telescope mirrors were repaired to give clearer images but it did not enlighten me as to what the pictures showed.
Sometimes seeking to understand the unknowable is a pointless exercise when we have a mirror on the wall or a view on the world from our window.
“It was here
in our hearts,
the dark energy.
When hearing would be lost” – great lines among many, Gion
just a couple of suggestions-
“extraplanetory” = extraplanetary
“for even gods” = even for gods- Gion Gion

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LOVE SCENES

now that’s what i call as …lovely - Preeti Datar

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FAITHLESS HANDS

Beautiful! Message right on target. Wayne- Wayne Sapp

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Satish. May your days always be filled with good health, love beyond expectation, and an overload of inspiration. Love,- Carol Brown

strange write...enjoyed it though...creepy!- Doris Culverhouse

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DAMNED

Wow.. the poem was brilliant ..I loved the way you used interrogation to increase the effect- Rohit Mulange

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DIVING

Satish your powerful peace writing, as you know, I believe is brilliant this one stays on course as always. "...Give me some language to read again from the walls". A profound line of the world where translations need not be locked away or unfound as we would start again with a clean slate. Would we make the same mistakes...? Thanks for sharing and keeping the mind alert. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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SMOKING CANDLE-

Your lines ricochet and resound. Marvelous work, Verma. Regards.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad


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THE DEAD DREAM

What a remarkable poem! "Taking the thought to its fossil home" A very memorable line. Thanks!-Midnight Hour

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sui generis

The true characteristics of a human can be seen when there is a crisis. Strength or weaknesses are displayed according to each character. There is much to think about in this poem. Satish, I am reading it again ....- Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia


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THE END

Interesting and intriguing write Satish.. my youngest son is in the military in Iraq so enjoyed this last line.. the hunger situation is a world wide epidemic while the fat cats get fatter luv.. very descriptive and poignant my friend ..luv..-Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

hunger, war, violence ... not good stuff for anybody. Amen to Peace. thank you,-Chuck Keys

A pleasure to read your awesome poetry today Satish. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love,-Carol Brown

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प्रतिलोम

मुझे बहुत खुशी है कि आप जो लिखते हैं मैं पढ़ सकता हूँ
पर बहुत दुःख इस बात का है कि जो पढ़ा उसका अर्थ नहीं लगा पाता हूँ .
इसलिए मैं आपकी हर कविता पढ़ता हूँ पर कुछ कमेन्ट नहीं देता
बहुत दिनों से चाह रहा था कि मैं अपना ये स्पष्टीकरण आपको दूँ .- Vishvnand

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BIRTHDAY

age brings grace like your poetry-JVL NARASIMHA RAO

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Damned

An alluring piece, though i don't understand it quite.-Malsawmi Jacob, Mumbai

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ART AND DESIRE

Very creative write on Art and Desire, How do they mingle with each, enjoyed it, Satish-Dr.Ram Mehta

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SLAIN ROSES

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

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INTROSPECTION

Satish your unabandoned verses seeking peace and rejecting the inhumanity of war, hunger, and slow processing death leave the readers in a world of unforgiveable sin that has and is taking place. I waiver at the imagery of your last verse as the starkness of the thin slivered body projects after death to the sliver of the "crescent moon". A true talent using your words to seek peace, thank you. :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA


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*DEPRESSION

Satish an informative reader comes from an informative writer, naturally I was not familiar with Kanu Sanyal and the naxalite movement, but your words give me the power to explore the world and the decisions and choices people make in their political opinions. No group likes 'their feathers ruffled' but it is sad that all political groups can not be heard. May all countries find a way for peace soon. Thank you for sharing Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger

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SCRUTINY

He may refer to Gandhi, the father of the nation- JVL NARASIMHA RAO

of all the lines, this one caught my eyes... "Maybe I will watch the tree for some sanity to produce the blossoms - " ... and also maybe the last verse... nice write sir... keep it up!- Prince Obed de la CRUZ

TRUTH can not be explained.A good one.- SHRIDHAR B S

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THE VISITOR

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

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The dead dream

Satish, Your poems are difficult and only those who have patience and ability can understand the depth and meaning of these poems. I read Chritropher Rollason's comments on you in the latest issue of IJPCL. Regards- k K Srivastava, New Delhi


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INTENSITY

Satish your political prowess and open speaking of issues that facilitate the mind with awareness is itself one step through the darkness. Hold the "lantern" high that all might see any and all unjustice. As always, I thank you for sharing your brilliant work. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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FROZEN

enjoyed reading- Doris Culverhouse

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

NOt sure I understand it, but it seems very well written and I enjoyed the imagery. Luv,- Andrea Dietrich

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CHESSBOARD

I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

enjoyable, pleasant read. thank you,- Chuck Keys

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दंश घाव

liked the style and the use of words- renu rakheja


very nice-Swayam Prabha Misra


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