Satish,
I like this poem’s imagery. When I read it I found an immediate attraction to it.
Fergus
“An endless journey for the
bleeders in labyrinthine life
of yes and no.”-Gion Gion
Language – so many sounds and syllables until filtered through mouth and ear.
The idea of eruptions is great.- Gion Gion
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