Satish Vermaji, Your angst for the monolithic religions and the youth sacrificing their lives which is akin to hysterectomy for a dubious cause, thus life reducing to a commodity is understandable. "Selling rage" is poignantly clear and polytheists are no exception here. The selection of words is very good.
Rather than an assertion " Be 'it' today, or tomorrow, the blood brings honor", I would have liked it expressed as a question.
Again, its true that the roots are destroying in Democracies. But then, but then it is roots to blame for they nourish the tops toiling hard to squeeze the essences from earth. May be the soil needs a different kind of structure.
A very thought provoking poem. It could have been dressed a bit better. Congrats and best regards-NS Murty, Bangalore
Rather than an assertion " Be 'it' today, or tomorrow, the blood brings honor", I would have liked it expressed as a question.
Again, its true that the roots are destroying in Democracies. But then, but then it is roots to blame for they nourish the tops toiling hard to squeeze the essences from earth. May be the soil needs a different kind of structure.
A very thought provoking poem. It could have been dressed a bit better. Congrats and best regards-NS Murty, Bangalore
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