Disbelievingly

Moved to workshop as I think the images are too ambiguous. Interesting poem, but I have no clue!-Lavonne Westbrooks

As in your other poem, you need to look twice for an opening line:
You wear mauve when I cry.
I really like some of the images you come up with, but in the ther disparity needs to be connected in some way.
Try again.
And for God's sake, if any of these are darlings, kill them.- maggie flanagan-wilkie

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