Unfortunately, so long as there be human breath exhaling...so too there wuill be dread, anathema and unholy acts of maljustice... Your linage at times may be in poetic piece-meal...but they are artistically savoury....You Rock,Satish V. -
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Frank,Linda & Leaf. You all have prodded me with a stick.My ashe are still hot.The other day I was reading about the trial & indictment for genocide by Charles Taylor in Liberia & Blood diamonds of Sierra Leone. Stop. Looking at a boxcar of jews being transported to Auschwitz & Treblinka. Gas chambers.Denuded bodies. Piles of hair & shoes.Stop.Guernica.Most powerful political statement 0f Picasso.In India farmers will commit suicides because crops had failed. I watch daily the deprivation, hunger & poverty. The human misery & inequality. I suffer. The common clitche will not deliver the force. Punch comes from incompleteness & something remaining unsaid &topsy;- turvy.- satishverma
Fragments of good lines for us to try to piece together. Frank made me laugh with his candid comment.- LightH2O
Well,now, Satish..you have to admit...Between short-legged Pygmies playing PEAK-a-boo with ice-shard, and obseving the graphic removal of human skin that belongs to us....might cause Reader's to react as Leaf & Linda have, below...Now, me ? I love a puzzle as well as the Dark's darkest side and upturning the neve-endings of my faithful Readership...But my friend...this poem is why, I think they created the dreaded cliche "YOU TAKE THE CAKE"!!!!LOL! Abstractively outrageous penning!- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
I have to agree with what Leafsailor said. Hu????- Linda Winchell
hay! I haven't a clue , but I understand it completely, you and you alone can do this , my friend, I love this it just goes right to my spirit , no stops along the way, I love this for its wonderful ability to awaken my imagination it is like reading four poems at once with half of the lines missing and understanding them all ,on a spiritual level... peace and love to you and yours- leafsailor
Frank,Linda & Leaf. You all have prodded me with a stick.My ashe are still hot.The other day I was reading about the trial & indictment for genocide by Charles Taylor in Liberia & Blood diamonds of Sierra Leone. Stop. Looking at a boxcar of jews being transported to Auschwitz & Treblinka. Gas chambers.Denuded bodies. Piles of hair & shoes.Stop.Guernica.Most powerful political statement 0f Picasso.In India farmers will commit suicides because crops had failed. I watch daily the deprivation, hunger & poverty. The human misery & inequality. I suffer. The common clitche will not deliver the force. Punch comes from incompleteness & something remaining unsaid &topsy;- turvy.- satishverma
Fragments of good lines for us to try to piece together. Frank made me laugh with his candid comment.- LightH2O
Well,now, Satish..you have to admit...Between short-legged Pygmies playing PEAK-a-boo with ice-shard, and obseving the graphic removal of human skin that belongs to us....might cause Reader's to react as Leaf & Linda have, below...Now, me ? I love a puzzle as well as the Dark's darkest side and upturning the neve-endings of my faithful Readership...But my friend...this poem is why, I think they created the dreaded cliche "YOU TAKE THE CAKE"!!!!LOL! Abstractively outrageous penning!- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
I have to agree with what Leafsailor said. Hu????- Linda Winchell
hay! I haven't a clue , but I understand it completely, you and you alone can do this , my friend, I love this it just goes right to my spirit , no stops along the way, I love this for its wonderful ability to awaken my imagination it is like reading four poems at once with half of the lines missing and understanding them all ,on a spiritual level... peace and love to you and yours- leafsailor
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