NO-MAN’S-LAND

That first stanza is so gripping as well as some of the other lines. I agree with Cyn, lots of torment and anguish displayed here.-  LightH2O

So deeply sad and tormenting, such anguish vividly described here. The style is smooth and direct, conveys the heartache with strong impact, and the title wraps it up so completely. Great piece of work!-  Cyn BuhainBaello

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