Flares

This evoked strong imagery and said so much with so little, very beautiful.-Kestrova

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Strangely

Great write.-Tony36

Wonderful write my friend. People are very strange indeed! we need to check our self's.-willyweed

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The Final Retreat

When my time comes, I will lose everything............ Plain truth about life. Congrats for being the member's -Jayatissa K. Liyanage

We owe nothing! And you seem able to put across nicely. -Christina Simmons

Transcendent
The tone of loss here is heart aching. The imagery is both concrete and physical while also being diaphanous and ethereal. There is science present, religion and strong emotive power. Something like remorse moves through the verses without being remorseful. The emotions and intellect both are owned, but elusive. This is a very moving poem. A very human poem. Transcendent in its execution. Humbling. -Lantz Pierre

Gradually I will stop
speaking about myself. When
my time comes, I will lose everything
and set you free.

The blind eagle will find its abode.
- - - - - - - - - - -A deeply philosophical poem
Poetry speaks our life.Poetry is the retreat of a poet. But gradually we all prepare for our final retreat.
.Congratulations for Poem of the day. -Bharati Nayak

Fire! !
This was not the game. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Excellent Poem
Indeed it is a final retreat. Congrats for the honour of POTD.-Mohammed Asim Nehal

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Ghost Town

Excellent word play.-Jessica

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Carnality

This writing spoke to me in such a powerful way. I used to be afraid of much of what you wrote about and even now I come with apprehension somewhat because so much was too complicated for me to grasp and yet I was oftentimes finding direction in your words and so I would open your pages and do the best I could with understanding.-Debera

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From The Cherry Blossoms

LINKS THE MOVEMENT OF GRIEF
Like the saunder waves of grey-burkej1h

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Inward Journey

The mentor wants blood, truth
The mentor wants blood, truth was in body,
small seeds of life.
The mentor wants food, truth was in blood --- small seeds of the dandoline!!!-burkej1h

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Flame

Yes, I like the profound sense in this poem. Searching for the truth needs the energy/heat of the Spirit within. We must not lose that!- MrJMSm

A very good write.-Trucker

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Transitional Edge

great write as always.- mesayers

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Muse And Sorrow

IT'S AN AGE OF ELECTRONIC TORTURE TO THE INNOCENT. PLEASE, TAKE CARE OF THEM. I ENJOY YOUR POEMS SO MUCH.- Sidhan

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For A Forgotton Story

I read you and enjoy but often fear commenting thank you for sharing- Sid "de" knees

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Sanity

Hi. Happy Thanx/Mourning Day in the USA. Panoplay of imagery and understated aspiration/action weaves a mysterious and breezy poetic tapestry; thanx. Namaste.-reality1

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Moving Shadows

Tender writings my Friend-SuperSlimJim 

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Insight

A deep excellent poem..-Floreann Cawley

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CRUEL BONHOMIE

Interesting, impressive, strange perspective beyond the cruelty and BONHOMIE.Congrat-Ovidiu Bocsa

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FROM THE WOMB

Beautiful visions, Satish, a questioning spirit, makes the reader feel complete.-Doug Vinson

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Endless Yearning

A superb write Satish!-Pauline Miller 

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Invisible Ink

very good Satish. -Alan Brown 

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A Celestial Missive

Excellent poem my friend , Thanks.. iip-Is It Poetry

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Entering Sanctum Sanctorum

'A sacred lotus emerges
from the navel, while you rest
on trembling waves. I am shedding
my leaves.'
vibrant imagery, intriguing.-Terry Craddock

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Giving A Miss

'Breasts plundered―
galaxies were ready to
reglitter the dark moons.

Why to hide anything,
when you don't possess
any earthly gifts? '

wonderful contrasts in imagery between lines and stanzas 10+-Terry Craddock

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Metempsychosis

The poem seems to be an in indictment of a section of our society which savours and relishes their baser instincts which ultimately violates our social fabric. Thanks, SV Sir.
In smoke screen you
become a lizard, creeping on lips,
hips, and chest of an ignorant person.-Rajnish Manga

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When The Attack Comes

I enjoyed this very much
Comment: Evocative and concise, ambiguous yet rich with symbolic specifics, this is a delightful little gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing it.-Michael Nabert

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Lips And Wordless Miracle

A beautiful poem with lots of twists and turns. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.-Anil Kumar Panda

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Paradise

A casual read and much delighting.-Lucas Woods 

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Engagements

This is just lovely-your imagery is always so lush.-Brenda

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Transitional Edge

The poem is philosophical. Good share.-Rajiv Ajjibal, Sirsi,Uttara Kannada,Karnataka

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For A Cause

Nice lines, in fact it's meaning has trapped in your beauteous lines... -Muhammad Rashid PK, KOZHIKODE

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Unyielding

I really like this style. There is always a fine line between senseless gibberish and meaningful prose. Your words seem carefully chosen vs haphazardly throw together. Even when they're not understood; a much deeper meaning is obviously apparent. -NotAboutMe

the description is quite mesmerizing
really enjoyed!

keep writing :)-Tazeen Ahmed 

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Reviled And Revered

Your writings seem like something one would find in an ancient scroll. You are very gifted at sharing the pain of the human condition. These words seem very relatable; whether they are taken literally or as analogy. -NotAboutMe 

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In Totality

Wow - the way you express this is very powerful. Especially the last line. I read the poem twice, and I am having some trouble understanding it, but sometimes I think that's the best thing in a poem - so we might contemplate our own meanings.-Anais Grey

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Jottings

Strings of music pulled from recent and distant history - a salad. -allets 

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Meditation

That is so you! A peace image or call for quiet - nice - allets 

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Mood Swings

Wow, so much visually swirling about. Your first stanza hooked me and it just blew me away. Amazing--Brenda

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Afterimages

Wow oh wow-this is just beautiful! Your visuals are a story within a story-loved it!-Brenda

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Wings Attached

Your words are so beautiful and yet mystifying. They speak poetically of art that steals the meaning from my lips. Well done. -Mr Darcy

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Dirty homes

It is possible to interpret this poem and most of your poems in general as pessimistic. However, I understand this and many of your other poems as a yearning, a longing, a screech to come out of this insane situation where god dies daily, but closed-eyed people insist on reading something positive where god lives as a decorative possession in affluent homes. They would instantly discard texts that do not speak of beautiful things with beautiful words. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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The Blue Lake Burns

There is only Love... Ever the only answer-K

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Ceremonial

I will unmourn my death Perfect.-Mike Adam

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Scouring

for me, this is astute social commentary... but i do hope to see a world that doesn't inflict violence on every family... or a world where every family doesn't inflict violence within and thereby assault the world... ~ violence of any kind is just too damaging and hard to accept in any form...-serah . 

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Massive Explosion

vivid... i can actually visualize emotional demolition... -. serah . 

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A Kiss Melts

Beautiful imagery.-MrJMSm

Nice write.-Trucker

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Tree Of Light Dances

I'm not sure I understand all of this but I enjoyed reading your poem. Really good descriptive write..liked..-Jazmine Reid

Beautiful write, loved this.Madeira

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Innocent Was The Betrayal

A good write.-darkwolf2uk

Wonderful!.-Madeira

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Gather The Sun

Love 'we disintegrate in semi colons' - fab write .-Helenmatherrogers

A great write .-HITENDRA

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Passion Is A Hurricane

Beautiful write.-pagangirl95

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Lips Will Measure

An interesting write-darkwolf2uk

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To Laugh Or To Weep

Nice write
A dark poem need to read a few times to get into it but liked it.- Trucker

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Grief Unspoken

An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing. -Summersounds68

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Irreverent

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. "yellow paper" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.-Oneyedtoad

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Unsinking In Depth

I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.-Augustus

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Voiceless Calling

"Do not stop me if I start bleeding"
Truly a bold statement.-abstractempo

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BRAIN-DEAD

What a profound poem ..... 😀-sweetsapote1

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Welcome Sir!

and fruit is a luxury a saddness - allets

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‘crossing The Bar' Once Again...

I think of the enviornment and the climate - tears in valleys, hmmmm . . . any ressurection now would probably be welcome -allets

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The Tear Of Things

must have been some trial if the verdict had to be judged - good one Satish - allets

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Non - ‘i’

are struck by sun greetings, but winter is coming and clouds obscure the horizon. I am struck perpetually by greetings to the moon and occasionally, only occasionally, to the sun. - enjoyed, -llets

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No Strings

I do so enjoy your writing. Always impressive, always !-Gene Gary

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Summer’s Fault

Absolutely amazing work, as usual .-Pharaoh33

a wonderful poem my friend.-willyweed

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Gifting

I love the neat layout. Punchy cryptic stanzas that tantalise and tease with possible discoveries.
Take care, -Mr Darcy

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Earth's Intelligence

Wow this is a brilliant write. What really caught me was the beautiful imagery created with:
"The birds are
going to follow the sun carrying
the moon on their wings. "
As certain birds navigate the earth via the magnetic field (governed by gravity) which also interacts most closely with the moon (the closest object to us in space) - I found this specific line genius.

There is only one tiny suggestion I have for improvement:
"Do not open this dirt file of
the suspended time. It reverberates"
the second line of this could be
"suspended time; it reverberates"
taking out the filler word will decrease the syllable count of this line and help it read better, and a full stop in that particular position is not quite necessary, a semicolon keeps the ideas joined and flowing a bit more than it does.
But that's such a minor detail, which isn't going to take away from me nominating this for the weekly contest.-ether

Judging Comment:

The beauty in this piece is that the topic is something both elegant and completely unrelated to all the drama and unrest going on in the world lately. The descriptions are both fun and wheel spinning, and yet off the wall without being totally off the rail - which was an interesting way to complete such a piece - but it worked 100% of the way through. Which is something I truly admire about this author this week, they tried something both unrealistic and beautiful yet al the while the author stuck it out and tried to make that work. Which this week was a success.-BlueJay

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Bewildering

Satish,
This is another amazingly accomplished write.
Excellent. -Ben Pickard

Just wonderful. -Em

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Pardon My Darkness

Nice narration of Violincell that is always present in Some people that are ruled by Yama!
Just Depicted my Life as is now..! relaxes me so much and immensely! .. and that Poem would fall n the ground-Siddartha Montik

A poem falls on the ground
to breath again.
A wonderful inspirational write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Trying To Sleep

Floats on the dampened page of life. Profound and thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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On The Breast Of Flames

Yes... my sky, my roof and my 'he'...what about that... we had been fighting for the teachers without paying even a little heed to their teachings.

I am sorry I have been responding to your poems far too frequently. Readers should not think I am trying to form a group. I respond when I feel like, that's all. Readers...please grow up, as you read on!!! Surya please do not delete this...let everyone know that I am responding to accusations and allegations against the quality of YS.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Irreverent

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. "yellow paper" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.-Oneyedtoad

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Through your poem

Hello Sir,

My name is Naaz Fatima Khan and Iam writing you from Lucknow.
The common link here is Highonpoem. Today, in fact minutes before I read your poem titled "Love in Original". After reading that, I went to the descriptive profile of yours. Initially, as a person who has attached her identity along with words and expressions, your poem travelled and reached to that admiration. Secondly, when your profile says about the social causes and your active involvement, that brought the another touch of respect. 
So, without wasting my time, Iam here to give you and Ma'am many best wishes for all the humanity you possess. Its a blessing of its own kind if time allows you to cross such people who sends beautiful thoughts to the world. Iam feeling lucky in that same way.
It would be my fortune if I could be any sort of help in this.
Basically, I have been indulged in writing. But whatever I do, the core intention is to inspire people around.

I would love to hear from you.

Regards,- Naaz Fatima Khan,Lucknow

A home in my home

Your poems have always inspired me to write, Satish ji. Thank you for sharing this poem.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Silence Of Doors

This deep, thought-provoking poem
asks more questions than it answers.
Must be read more than once,
to gain more from it. - Briz

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In The Garden Of Gethsemane

Wow, this is brutal and raw and I absolutely loved it! Your visuals although hard are breathtaking. This is just beautiful.-Brenda

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New Alphabet

I would work on the form, it is a little sloppy. I did like the first stanza though!-bubblz 

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Become My Father

Beautiful write up Sir....I liked it...
The feelings were very true.-Randhir kaur

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Lips Of Moon Were Hot

Cheated....Wowww..fantastic read..-Randhir kaur

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Matrix

Don't know if this inspired me, but it did give me a moment to pause.-noah count

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Non-Story

A beautiful poem sir. I too would like to tread your path to find the missing link.-Konalli Rajeev Naik, Kundapur

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Crossroads

A thoughtful introspection carried out at a crossroad in life is presented in the form of verse. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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Pause

There are beautiful lines in the poem. Enjoyed reading it multiple times. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Black Days

Brilliant dark ink.-Cherie Nolan

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Something To Happen

You are a great poet. I like the use of words from your mind.++++10
As a poet who loves words you may like my A Hauntingly Beautiful Word.
Robert-Robert Murray Smith 

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Prayer In Message

I am walking barefoot
To feel the bygone dead
sacrifices].
Conceptualization of emotions coming from the bottom of heart and very touching. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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Black Sun

The second verse made me give a pause...
Breath taking. -abstractempo

Very well done....a great write.-Jeff

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Another Blossom

Nice one... Golden place
Golden place

Dreams never end
And send
Unfulfilled desire
That shall realize never

It is better
To put end here
And regain control
Over inner call

No one is sure
Of next birth to secure
Same character
For companion and being as stage actor

So life shall stand as mirage
And can never change
Man’s ambition
In present relation

So calm down
And make it known
That you are leaving golden place
With smiling face.-Hasmukh amathalal mehta, Ahmedabad

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Meanness

this is powerful.-authorAAA

I can't imagine where you get your ideas, but they're something to admire for sure.-abstractempo

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Drought

Impactful; heavy on the heart, light in the mind.-abstractempo

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Tracking

Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.-rrodriguez

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Rambling Roses

Wow!!AMAZING WORK HERE...I AM AT A LOSS FOR WORDS OTHER THAN WoW!!-Pharaoh33

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Chessboard

You are a Johann Sebastian Bach of poetry. Complicated, forcing one to slow down and listen to the words a couple times in concentration to hear the music hidden inside. To hear through "the complication" to the simple melody within. Thank you for slowing us down...-B.Joel

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Aubrurn Dawn

When you witness death at close quarters it has a profound affect on the rest of your life, as it is in your case, intuitive sad write.-Dolly'sPoems

What a saga, great piece. The simplicity And flow sparkle.-Senatorucheo

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Circle Of Glory

great write, liked.-LAD1066

Love 'the shadow was a terrorist on the terrace' as always a deep and beautifully crafted write.- Helenmatherrogers

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A Handful Of Victories

A sorrowful yet compelling read.-Briz

Death from war certainly leaves scars on us forever, especially when experienced first hand. Afterwards it seems so meaningless. Love the second verse. Dolly'sPoems

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Dying Beautifully

"The space between the memories will shrink and we will destroy the ugly calendar"
...fantastic ending, a parting shot at time, how we waste time.-Frank F Highly

Wow Wow Wow...excellent write, by far my favourite read of the day. I loved the use of words and their meaning. Deep and thought provoking. well done.- Frank F Highly

A very interestingly described write.-Jazmine Reid

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Easy To Forget

We are so many layers too deep for our own understanding, so we only see a thin layer, we forever search, this in itself can be overwhelming, and has driven some to madness. So we are better off enjoying this layer of life, although sometimes fraught with pain. Enjoyed reading your lovely poem.- Monica

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Tears Were Never Sweet

I concur with the previous comment tears were never sweet, great line, great write buddy!- grant

Tears are never sweet, sadness flows. There can be tears of joy. Beautiful.- Bjs

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Lake Scenes

I like it, a lovely scene constructed in verse!- grant

Brilliant poem, the dragonfly, Lake Huron in flames...wow.-Kw6fay

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Unfog The Sky

An example of your abiding talent here my friend - one of your gifts of excellent imagery lights up the verse - a poet's poem which I wish to read again and again - thank you for sharing it Satish my friend.- Fay Slimm

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Ressurection

An emotional piece. I particularly liked the first stanza where the wind writes and the sun wipes away.Might I just suggest that nowhere is usually written as one word. -Milly Hayward

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Dedication

nice...nature is not so harmoniums in the hands of modern men now as your verse is....
really enjoyable....a spontaneous flow of deep thinking of the polluted earth...
a good sharing.-B.m. Biswas

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Untitled

Bliss of looking back
at unreached peaks of pain.
Great imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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A Black Speech

The beginning of this poem, highlights our inability to opt for renunciation..Thank you for sharing Satish Vermanji..-V S

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Full Stop

Excellent and involving, as it were. I wouldn't have used the last line at all. Besides, isn't 'returning back' a tautology.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Noesis

Invoking the sun, you stay in shadows,
without qualms to hear
the swish of swords.
Beautiful lines. Thanks for the sharing.
10 for the nice poem.-Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Whirling Dervish

once upon a time i was there; the evening explained and poetically written by a true human, satish vermaji.. thank you sir... Not any more, I visit such a horrible place of loneliness! ! !-V S

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To Know What We Do Not Know

To know what we do not know, for now at least,
we must first learn what we're now ignorant of
then we'll be able to say with convincing words
whatever we know and perhaps be understood.-George Krokos

In anguish I search the answers
to deepest mysteries.
Profound introspective write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Never Wanting

Black versus black will
not brighten the screen. One third of
generation had the criminal record.

What an observation! I like your style and presentation....10-Sriranji Aratisankar

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Infinitude

The pursuit of location
where the eclipse descends like a dot
on truth.

I am going to touch
the surreal constellation
again in your wet eyes.

Good expression of feelings...thanks for sharing...10...-Sriranji Aratisankar

A beautifully conceived poem with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Never Again

The moon drenched lake
wails for the boat not to come.
Beautiful and realistic conceptualization of feelings in the timeless dawn. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Sheela-Na-Gig

You are a very unique writer and deep...This one I like very much... -Pharaoh33

Wonderful write.-Tony36

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Stoned

whoa this is intense as hell! No remorse for wrongs wrought?- mrpoofs

A great verb - morph

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Blind Encounter

So much beautiful imagery here-just lovely.-Brenda

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Fall of a Tender Doctrine

I love this one. -Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore

Beautifully sad. I agree with the views of the poem in that death is not corrupt. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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I Will Not Agree

The sermons, the prayers won't
help you become a subject―
to unseen god.

wonderful thought to proclaim that religions are the just guidance! !-V S 

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The Atavism

Yes, hardly any hope for humanity. Things are really gross. A profound piece of writing.-Nosheen Irfan

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Traveling Constantly

Who allowed the novice,
third mate to steer the ship?
A beautifully conceived thought provoking poem raising very important questions.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Silent Prayer

Excellent expression shows the poets humility but at the same time his resolve to remain grounded with realities. Nice prayer. Thanks. I quote:
....I will / always fight my demons / with my broken pen.
I want to remain a human being.-Rajnish Manga

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Super Terrain

Hello,
We live in a world of truth and lies. Each one balancing the other creating dark and light. With this knowledge we each have a quest to reach our own destiny.

Thank you for sharing. ,Take care, Mr Darcy

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dead bodies

Hello Satish,
I read a lot of your poetry.
Your imagery about the ”dead bodies” I’ve walked over freezes me in my tracks. I do think about dead people a lot. I read obituaries. That kind of stuff. I have a lot of feeling about many of your poems. I feel like I know you… or like I can see you speaking to me. It is horrifying and ferociously original.
I’ve been sifting through the bios listed on highonpoems.com. yours was one of the first I read. There is so much about your bio that makes me feel like a deer in headlights.

I can hardly believe how much you have written.
I’m a fan of yours Satish Verma.-Kenneth Miller 

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Feet of Clay

I like this poem for the word selection and construction, but not able to get into it. Hope the author can help.-KPankajam, CHENNAI

Powerful images. But the "meaning" eludes me, though the poem does speak.-Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore

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End Thinking

"where you were drowned one day in the eyes of the needle" Man.. That is awesome, Satish! - Noel Tapia

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Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

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In Search Of Peace

Super! I enjoyed reading your poem, "Jealousy: sand was under the nails. Now I will find the remains of an ocean in your eyes." Poetry!! - Lina Lotus

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My Blue Valley Burns

Very sombre, very poignant, Satish ji. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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I Will Not Come Back

You can not leap over the grass of antiquity.
Hats off for this precious nugget of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Some Ghosting

I'm not sure I understand it, but thanks for sharing.-Spock The Vegan

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Unpretending

Unassuming and honest outlook towards life, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

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Mauled Self

Satish ji, a nice, challenging poem that takes the reader to the threshold of death. The emotional churning at that hour is expressed powerfully. - GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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Wandering Jew

I especially loved: "you forget, how many fathers you have." It reminds me of the patriarchs of the bible... I don't know if that is what you mean or not, but I love the write. - Stephanie Mahlan

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REVISED VERSION

Nice verse "Meditating on the words and meaning, I read your face".-Louis Borgo

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Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

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Charity

This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight

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Meanness

this is powerful-authorAAA

I can't imagine where you get your ideas, but they're something to admire for sure.-abstractempo

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The Second Night

Wow .... Love your selection of words . Its was amazing.- Hamad Riaz

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Body Becomes the Path

The enigma of life and death has always been insurmountable. The relentless probe continues.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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Charity

This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight 

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Suicides

You seem to post quality, image-filled poetry daily seemingly without any effort whatsoever. This is an excellent little piece.-Sir Lancelot

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WRAPPED IN STIGMA

A scattering of interesting personal images...Very different! Little vignettes of life! Lovely - I could visualize them well. Carry on writing! Hugs! -Aqua Marine 

Lovely images! Not sure what you are writing about. Second stanza is my favorite!-Kim Rodrigues 

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Last Freedom

wow! this is an incredible piece!!
loved the plot!
keep writing :-Shadowine 

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The Secular Ethics

Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. I was wondering can you return the favor and just check out my post about the connection between Superman and Jesus christ thank you. -B-law

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A Revival

Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. I was wondering can you check out my story. -B-law

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Rampage

Woe..very deep and great usage of words...I like it s lot!-Pharaoh33

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Carnality

the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work.-willyweed

The departure of death... death hangs around looking for an opportunity. I read it twice.-rrodriguez

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Vigilance

This is a lot to take in. I think I have to be in a clearer state of mind to interpret it appropriately.-abstractempo

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The Earthen Death

Wonderful and thought provoking sharing done definitely...10-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Existential Plight

Satish
Good poem. See my You Are Not Superior To Me And Vice Versa. Also, Satisfaction. -Robert Murray Smith

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Loose Threads

State of mind wonderfully unfolded through this verse rich with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Aham Asmi, I Am I Am

I held you on to my breast.
Give me your fangs
and give me your venom.
I was blue and I am the death.

Wow. Marvelous. A poem of pure passion and delicate feelings.
10+++ for the poem. Thanks for the sharing. -Subhas Chandra Chakra

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For Something

The tender touch.
It reaches you inside. You
start trembling
like aspen, ready to fall.

Full breasted, a
crimson moon will spill
the buttermilk for
a rosarian.

Two beautiful stanzas from a very beautiful poem.
Thanks poet for sharing it.10 mark's. -Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Fierce Mooning

Last lines very effective, I enjoyed this read!-slithr

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Furious Wounds

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Struggle With Emperor Constantine's Dictating Christianity Be Empire Building (called the Bible) Month, in the USA, to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A subtly musical and very cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity; liked the veracity and earthen realism, bravo. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Sayonara. Matutinally Yours.-reality1

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Cracking Of Dawn

Wow! Extremely deep, I'm still absorbing all of this-well done--Brenda

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Claustrophobia

Nice. No equal to you the way you write emotions. Regards, -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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IN EXILE

Interesting imagery about death and truth.-The Seeker

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Gather The Sun

A lot meaning in words, a powerful poem that creates an impact with every read, well written Sir. -Madhumitha Murali, Bangalore

"I gather the sun in my poems" - such a wonderful last line following a very powerful poem. May the 'gathered sun 'shine out from your poems. Thanks for sharing.-Arvil Meallem, Israel

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Synopsis

A great poem. I would value your comments on my: The Mind Nos.1@2. -Robert Murray Smith

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Abstract Thoughts

A wonderful poem. Thank you. See my poems The Mind Nos.1 and 2. I would appreciate your comments.-Robert Murray Smith

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Ascending Paresis

Why the wealth brings-
the change of life?
A wandering pain
caves in, where the moon
looks sick in its paleness.
Beautiful. Highly appreciable lines.
10++ for sharing this poem.Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Staircases

'Why the pink words
float in black eyes?
I swear, I will not look
at the moon again- - -A beautiful write.Want to read it again .-Bharati Nayak

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The Essence Of Nothingness

Start the fight afresh, good one sir, namaskar.-Gajanan Mishra

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Carnality

the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work. -willyweed

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Ghostly

Was this translated from another language?-abstractempo

I loved this!-Dandylion

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Unhitching

This piece gets inside my head and convinces me that it is real. All the corners that the reader connects implement a valuable number of transitions, at the same time painting a natural display of multiversity as the world does of God.-abstractempo

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Tasting Blood

Deep, I just threw some bread out for the birds it's night time, am I wrong?-almostdead

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Moving Shadows

The formatting at first has the impression of a haiku, but after reading the lines it's clear that the piece is not. I respect your ambitious formatting, only to me it feels like you were trying to replace something that wasn't there. Moreover, I wish you would instead say "send pink rains" rather than "send the pink rains" because the reader doesn't really know what you specifically mean. By putting it under general terms, the reader may interpret that for themselves.

An excuse to blow out all the candles and (burn) the limbs.

The three lines in stanza #2 are initially seen as separate, but when in putting them together as one straight line their value is more adequately observed - Not to change the structure, but to make sure it's making sense - and when doing so you realize that it's written incorrectly.

It's those little things that compromise a good work's potential.-abstractempo

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Wounded Path

I have read two of your poems and it saddens me that more people haven't seen them. Your words are beautiful and difficult and deserve a much larger audience.-JustABird

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Otherness

"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."

This is superb.Thank you.-lysistrata

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Visualization

"The misty moon has scattered your shadow over my cage
Watch how this drowned bird would turn into a passionate wave."

That's my poetic answer to your "Visualization"...
I like it.-lysistrata

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Degenerating

Truly beautiful imagery that really made me stop and think, exceedingly well done, look forward to seeing more.-W. G. Simms

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Silver Trails

I love the way you put words together. Powerfully and interestingly written! I also love the refusal to accept half-dead poems. Great line!-VH42

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Today

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good African-American Music, Caribbean-American Mths, in the USA, to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A musical and cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity; ethereal and real relations in time, space, and life make it worth reading again and again. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Namaste. Matutinally Yours, james-reality1

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Botanically

Some of your images in this one are really powerful! I also love the line, "I will not accept a half-lip." The last stanza is fantastic!-VH42

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Regenerating

I like the way you put words together. I especially like the third stanza.-VH42

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Smiling Buddha

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Struggle With Emperor Constantine's Dictating Christianity Be Empire Building (called the Bible) Month to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A dark yet musical and cool while hot poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Sayonara. Matutinally Yours, -reality1 

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Sovereignty

I like the juxtaposition of the breast tumor, which blocks the flow of milk (and possibly the flow of a life) and the "tragic flow of history". Also the image of "an Adonis to stitch the wounds of angels".-VH42

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Eternal Cuddle

Eternal cuddle? The term actually made me chuckle a bit.-Celeste Silver

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Saturn Will Shortly Rise

I really liked this a lot-there's so much meaning and thoughts in this write. Well done--Brenda

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Gather The Sun

"I gather the sun in my poems" - such a wonderful last line following a very powerful poem. May the 'gathered sun 'shine out from your poems. Thanks for sharing. -Arvil Meallem, Israel

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LIVING DANGEROUSLY

Great write Satish..-Silent One 

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DECIDUOUSLY

Nice ... Beautifully said ...-Probir Gupta 

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No Banality

awesome...I enjoy...unique concept...
the dark devours the light...an excellent image...thanks-Rgarwal Rahul

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What A Galaxy

enjoyed the great work, Satish Vermaji..You have always fascinated me as a few other favorites of mine here..-V S

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Strange Phenomenon

'brain-dead
with amnesia
in winter snow'
loved this poem from the first three lines, superb.-Terry Craddock

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A Lone Prayer

'Leave your seminal
expression with minimal
damage.I am excluding the
human race.'

an ideal we should all aspire to, perhaps especially the 'mollusks'-Terry Craddock

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Uncanny Feeling

 'time will not wait for me.
I started running
against the moon―'

love your style, try an out of body experience as a child with a high fever, will return to this poem.-Terry Craddock

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A Love Story

Another attractive write. Emotions pouring beautifully. They say words have their way of opening wounds. -DarkLight

Satish, this is a beautiful piece made even smoother with the lovely imagery and descriptions.

Here are my edit suggestions:

I have not asked for much but
still attached to you with subtitles
I wanted freedom from you,
removing stings from the flesh.
^^^
There were a few off flowy parts here and subtitles was typed wrong so I decided to just r-write it.

Anxiety was the darkest color
of floating buds on (A) lake.
Sitting on the edge of panic,
I started counting the waves.
^^^^
(A) is an added word and I feel it's needed.

Mixed emotions always subtract a smile
Just lonely, I went for the swim in rimless agony.
Have not heard much of you in ages.
Still memories crop up for a while.
I wanted nemesis from you.
^^^
in the second line I feel you could take out the 'just' and 'the' I feel should be an 'a'
Also, in the third line 'for a while' is not needed and sets the flow off a little.

Talking of blue and white clouds
love has many moods.
Devastated by a burning moon
I was wishing a watery burial.
^^
This is really good but because you haven't previously spoken of clouds and are just linking it with the sea from the previous stanza I feel it would read better without the word cloud as it seems to be just thrown in there.

These are only my suggestions.

All in all great write,-Em

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Rape Of Fragrance

Wow, wow, wow! That's all I can say.
Beautiful imagery. Nominated.-Em

Wow.. perfection. Nothing else i can say..-deeplydesturbed

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Bones Of Winds

Bones of winds, black and white bones on a flag of sin, all that conjures up the famous Pirate flag. Now you might tell us about the hidden gold or the gems within your poem that makes it quirky and unusual. Well done. keep writing.-Cleveland

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………….. Afraid Of Whom?

wow, you remind me of myself. we have different writing styles, but are big on metaphors and symbols. I love free verse. I just started to take up rhyming, but nothing beats the power of a free verse poem. overall, great metaphors and symbols, telling a great poem. excellent job!-Michael

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Golden Throne

Poetry is the shortest kind of fiction. Within your poem 'Golden Throne' lurks many suggestive topics. Behind your poem must be a story. I'm curious enough to try to understand what you had in mind when you wrote your poem since the topics are so varied.How does that sound?
Enjoy the day.-Cleveland

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Prozac

Nice write Satishverma. I tried thats stuff once when I had PTSD. I was done with it after two weeks. Enjoyed and liked your poem my friend...-Socrates

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Catastrophe

We are living in the end times.broken hearts deliver broken dreams.-Words

I might be wrong but: The dying moments of a relationship through images of apocalypse. Liked.- Helikon6

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First Step Of Creativity

Creative indeed satishverma from start to finish your words held me there.
I loved and favoured this one.-divena
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Meditation

Very visual write. Nice write-Suri Ben Noah

Nice write Sativerna. Maybe we could all take a lesson from the moon, and so bring peace to the world. I enjoyed your poem, my friend....- Socrates

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Day Dreaming

Super Pen! Loved And Liked!-Puds

A sense of the spiritual in 'Day Dreaming'. Giving permission to take a break and reach for respite.-GT

Intriguing poem.- Cleveland

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Parthenogenesis

Dear Mr.Verma,

Are we referring to the religious belief in miraculous
births like the children of Kunti, or the ideology behind the birth of Jesus. what is the reference to, of the immaculate Zen - bleeding in chips.

How intriguing is the poem, how i wish you would explain a bit of what you write.

Really thought provoking.-J Nair

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On The Death Of A Friend

This is very beautiful and replete with such beautiful imagery. I particularly like "Your face swims like a dragonfly on the interface of tears." I imagine a dragonfly whose wings are made translucent by human tears. Try as it might, it cannot reenter the frame of life. There is such a tinge of sadness to someone having died unsung. It reminds me of when I was nineteen, discovering that my father was buried in an unmarked grave. How dishonorable it seemed for him to be buried without even his name, unsung, if you will. While I remedied that by putting a marker on his grave, the sting of that finding has never left me.-Linda Marie Van Tassell 

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Not A Dream

i can't do justice at the moment in commenting on this poem, it blows me away. I will make it a point to come back to it, when I can... because, dam! it hits the insides of me and keeps bouncing back.-Invisible Ink 

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A Paragon

I love the punctuation used in this because I can read it in a certain way without worrying that I'm mistranslating it, and I lean towards poetry that doesn't rhyme. Also I love the scenery, it just flows (for me) from under the sea to a busy downtown area where no one is paying attention to a park where two old men are playing chess to a complete zoom out of the earth itself, spinning alone.-Catherine

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16th December 2013

writings on the wall with dark fingers..good one.-Gajanan Mishra

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A Death's Kiss

The earth worm was busy
In turning the earth's soil
Printing the seed's path
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I do not want to be talked about
like the setting sun- - - -A meaningful poem, thanks for sharing.-Bharati Nayak

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Breaking Black And White

separated by a-
monologue of lie.
Wonderful expression. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Unthreading

Beautiful poem rich in rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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