Friday, February 10, 2017

Fake Arrival

I love this. "Gliding on the clover, you invoke the sky."
Basically meaning that this being has their whole lives ahead of them, dreaming big.
Okay so the insect seeking liberation. My mind went crazy. What are you saying, is this moth a representation of a person seeking freedom from whatever it is trapping them up inside?
MY MIND IS CRAZY but I love your poem. I give you a 90 rating because there's always room to grow. I love your simplicity. If you look at my poetry you will see that my only few things I have published on this website are longer than the constitution...-MaddyDash09 

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