Monday, February 27, 2017

Marking The Graves

Yeah, very difficult question to give answer. But somehow the life has to go on. The wheel of time must roll to take us to our destination. Very nice.-Anil Kumar Panda

a poem of many questions? maybe we will know the answers one day!-Tom Allport

Each stanza is a poem. All graves. Metaphors come, and go. Too abstruse.-Robert Murray Smith

I had to read this poem several times but then it dawn on me such words really don't always make sense to the reader only for the writer....? ? ? Congratulations! ! !-Christina Simmons

The rage insults me. Who
Was perfect in the crowd
Do I ask the god?

A good stylistic embellishment
Buried in the use of fine rhetoric questions.
Well done! -Sylva-onyema Uba

In faith! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Perfect in the crowd... congrats on being selected...-Bernard F. Asuncion

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