A Summer Poem

I loved this poem, especially the line "Confine the blue lilies unkissed by tears" awesome poem! I can hardly wait to read the next one!-Louise Robello

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The Myths

Love the imagery.-jo Marie Christina

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O Blood, O Tears

Especially loved these lines Satish ji...
When you recite my
poems, a black hole opens the
mouth to suck them in.

Beautiful as always! Loved the poem much!- Giti Tyagi, Karnnal, India

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Becoming Strangers

 and behold: you can write again... lol

Happy holidays dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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Aborted Faith

Lovely lines Satish ji....
Moon has disappeared.
I forget the human touch.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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near the sun

You have a most beautiful way with words Satish. Sending love and peace your way at Christmastime.-Pauline Miller, UK

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Supposedly

just wow! and on so many levels too...-L. B. Mek

I love it.-Trenz Pruca

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Where Dreams Are Killed

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.

Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Forgetting Identity

Well done!-Raksha Manaktala Bhayana

Beautifully expressed Dr Saheb-Sharad Bhargava

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Crossing Death Zone

My friend Satishverma. A poem to mortality.-allets

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In Bell Time

Lovely lines Satish ji...
Night sky was lit up.
There was a flower show to celebrate
the beauty of supermoon.

Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Color And Shades Of Punta Cana

Love, love, love the layout. This was/is some journey.-Mr. Darcy

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Thinking Loud

I like this, but especially love the last two stanzas.-MelissaJA

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The Avenger

So layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always-L. B. Mek

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Forgetting Identity

Beautifully expressed Dr Saheb-Sharad Bhargava

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I Need You

Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Eros Was Blind

I will play with 🔥 in separating flames... insightful contemplation! 5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain

Coming of age with beautified situation. Eden was dying daily. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Lioness In Cloak

An insightful write! So well penned... Top score-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Fragment Pains

Only moon will cry.....great poetic expression! A magnificent piece of work....5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Blast Cells

Although I am a bit confused by the concept of this poem, it seems very unique and the choice of words are good! "Now theft has taken
place of stakes, meant for black lungs." This line would have to be my favorite because of how well you described it using the word theft.-Kay/Hayden 

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Some Halters

You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!-RDS

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In Quiteude

Despite oneself we walk into life's fire-Mr. Darcy

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A Moon Dance

Lovely metaphor. This is one i think i deciphered. A girl come of age?-Deluke Muwanigwa

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We Will Meet Again

Someone calls and there is promise of meeting. An amazing poem is well penned. This poem is excellent one.-Kumarmani Mahakul
 
'A poem
was born to inhale the angst' - so beautifully said!-Khairul Ahsan

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Where Was The Justice

Such a beautiful use of Oxymoron in these lines...
The moons were
alone in togetherness.

Beautiful as always Satish ji!- Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Contours Of Pain

Satish verma thank you for a searching inquiry through verse. Your words, always houghtful (though I might not comment on all) leave me hoping for a conclusion I know can never come. Really well done.-RDS

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Under The Lens

I shall just repeat 'just wow' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to praise your art befittingly:
'Syntax was
beautiful, not the abstract
of the hidden truth. You
resign to become a unique!

Helpless in my integrity
I don't forgive me, when
I forget my enemy.
And start thievery.'-L. B. Mek

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Retracing My Steps

just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent.-L. B. Mek

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Exiting Fog

'water has no feet' wonderful
'when stars go to sleep' lovely-saiom

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Becoming Otherself

Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Mode Of Slaughtering

India is still the land in which more people than anywhere else practice ahimsa
... in all areas including diet-saiom

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Unwedded

You have a remarkable way of expressing yourself through the images to paint in words. i love this verse.-Willys Watson 

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striking a bargain

This is a beautiful poem Satish but I'm not sure that I fully understand it. Could you explain it to me please?-Pauline Miller

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an ocean speaks

Loved these lines especially Satish ji... An untainted candle refuses to burn in the bed of roses Beautiful as always!-Giti Tyagi

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An Ocean Speaks

ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning SATISH ~ Thanks for an excllent & intriguing Poem ! 71% of the Earths Surface are covered by the OCEANS and they are all intimately connected by the WATER CYCLE ! Once the OCEANS were formed LIFE on Earth could begin ~ AMEN The ambient Temperature on the Earths Surface is now 16C. It is that that keeps the Oceans Liquid and a great reservoir of WATER to sustain all LIFE ON EARTH 24/7 !-
Blessings & Peace & Love-ANGELA & BRIAN

wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you go-on to weave this jaggedly tentative - yet gripping song, calling out for something whilst musing its virtues:
'On my tongue and
skin, your salt burns.'
'Unbroken thorns
will not give up. Catching your sleeves
they will beg you to come back.'-L. B. Mek

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Virtual Images

this is a very intense write...affairs start wars of the heart, and significant others lose trust.
then there ends up being ghosts of relationships...
and they haunt---

the last line allows for us to expand the allegory....war is for what? And why do we fight just prove we are more powerful than the other...playing God? Perhaps, yes.
Infidelity.....Playing God, destroying the relationship...throwing the relationship out of the garden.
quite like this piece...challenges the thoughts of the reader.-jacob erin-cilberto 

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Melting In Cold

Lovely lines Satish ji...
You
take a long breath and jump into sea.

Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal ,india

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In Terrible Times

This is very interesting. I love the lines:
"Your pretty face―
needs dusting. I was
curious to know about the story
of night shifts."

Love the meaning behind this, or at least, my interpretation on it. I will keep that to myself though. I really enjoy your wordplay and writing form. Flows very nicely. Nice work!-Broken. 

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Bumpy Ride

'Vibrations start when in
storm two dark caves meet in
jungle of irreverent words.'

'I will keep on prodding
your stooping shoulders
to stand erect.

Nothing else will count.'
just Brilliant!-L. B. Mek

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Hello Satish. This is an interesting read which seems to have deep meaning, but I don't understand it. Could you please explain it to me? With regards Pauline.-Pauline Miller

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poem on paper lips

Hello Satish. Another splendid write from your good self with some good lines added such as "The marrow will eat the bone." and "Between dot and dash I have left long pauses to understand unbroken lines."-Pauline Miller

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Nobody Was Innocent

Nice emotional imagery here. Powerful in these uncertain times.
Take care.-Mr. Darcy

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Friendship

Lovely poem Satish ji!
These lines reminded me of Atal Bihari Vajpayee's poem 'Unchaayi' (Great heights) in Hindi in which he expresses the same views as expressed in these lines...
Pinnacle of success
brings loneliness. You would
search yourself for company.- Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Something Of Nothing

A truly amazing piece you wrote here! Astonishing!-Audax

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Conflict Between Desires

Heart touching lines Satish ji...
You should not have left like
a thread from needle
Lovely poem!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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it matters

Hello Satish, this is beautiful. It holds such depth and feelings. Stay safe.-Pauline Miller

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Holding On

You write such praiseworthy lines and stanzas: "The castle / has connived with the moat / to end an era." I could quite honestly and easily highlight a number of others. It seems to me that, without fail, you are a go-to for great reads. :)-lyrycsyntyme

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What Else I Will Do

Well written, enjoyed the rhythm & flow.-Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach

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remote from sin

All I can say is that, like all of your work Satish,this is beautifully written and would touch the hearts of many and well worth reading.-Pauline Miller, UK

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Smoking Candles

Wow! The imagery is very strong.
"You left your guitar
on the moving sands of beach.
Waves pick up the song."
Stunning! Keep up the good work. It was a joy to read!-Jess 

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Fish Ladder

The title drew me in. The poem itself intrigues me, each stanza a puzzle to be opened before moving onto the next. I like this and found the imagery pleasing. I am sure I will return to this again and again.-Mr. Darcy

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Pragmatically

What words cannot say poetry can intimate. So thus the intimacy of this poem of yours.-Delmar Cooper 

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a strange phenomenon

So beautiful Satish and a joy to read. (Do you think you could leave a response on another poets work please?)-Pauline Miller

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Catching Myself

'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?

Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.

In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.'

Brilliant!-L. B. Mek

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I Keep Mum

That is a great honour.-Peter Kiggin

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Confusion

Loved the poem much Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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silvereyes

An interesting write Satish. I particularly like "When thoughts become a song, peace comes back and you can see the distance between the stars." Many thank for sharing. Regards Pauline., UK

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An Electric Affair

brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write's hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
'Guru' - I humbly thank you-L. B. Mek

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Wonderfully written Satish. I like how you say, "to blunt my hyperaesthesia which wants to drink moonlight. Clumsy with my pen, I write and rewrite a message which will not reach you." Regards- Pauline Miller, UK

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I Love You

Loved your poem Satish ji!
Beautiful as always...
Take a random fall
in the valley of flowers and
see the wounds of moon.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Hiding Truth

I prefer to take the path of ahimsa having in 2 or 3 other lives I think... been a warrior.-saiom

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My Salt Was Not On Sale

Beautiful expressions as always sir! Always such a pleasure to read your poems.-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

Beautiful expressions Satish ji!
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

"...the god without a temple on road... "
can't express the effect of these words...-Bhagyashree Mishra, RANCHI

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Adieu (To God)

A well-constructed piece of poetry indeed Satish.-Peter Kiggin

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Painless Green

I'm really in love with the
I'm really in love with the line "the fish smells the man". Structurally, visually, metaphorically, this is a great poem, I feel. The message, if I am indeed beginning to unravel and understand it, is wrapped well within.-lyrycsyntyme

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Punishment

Your story When it's dark outside and you're lying in your bed Your eyes are open but you're somewhere else inside your head The mind is spinning and you unravel the story that you read The truth of all the things you've done and have ever said Like a film of everything you've seen and been to and now its lead To some memories you keep and turmoil's leaving scars that only you know that bled The special moments captured like a bright light that you fumble around to tread The awkward silences and misfortunes that somehow turn into your final dread The things you shouldn't have done but you did them consequentially instead And then you fall asleep in the darkness of the night and dream another dream that may lie ahead…see more-Peter Kiggin

Satish , I have a feel of your work and it is not unlike mine as we both tangle with the present and past like two soldiers going out on a battle field to find only injured and dead bodies in our way.-Peter Kiggin

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Cool Embers

A deep and intriguing write Satish. I enjoyed the read. Thank you. Pauline.-Pauline Miller, UK

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Dividing Peace of Mind

Very insightful and so poignant at this time.-Peter Kiggin

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rocks understand

What a powerful poem! Your brown eyes still chase me to cross the wet boundaries of pain. A chunk of a star can decide. I love these summing up lines. Sad, if the rock could have understood your pain! May the portion of star you are waiting May hear you. Regards.-Dhal Jirel 'Ravi', NEPAL

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My Salt Was Not On Sale

Beautiful expressions as always sir! Always such a pleasure to read your poems.-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

Beautiful expressions Satish ji!
Loved these lines...
You become always a
new word in my poems-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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On Cobbled Trail

a wonderful take: wording the empowering 'attitude' in the term 'owning one's own destiny'-L. B. Mek

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behind windshields

Well penned sir. among the stanzas I love the third stanza. Regards from Nepal.-Dhal Jirel 'Ravi

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What Was The Great Idea

Lovely poem Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines...
Someone unknown
will come back to say goodbye.
My heart will miss beats.- Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Learning From Each Other

I like this poem very much.-Trenz Pruca

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In Hurling Light

Words sans meaningful expressions are worthless. Lovely presentation of ideas in the verse Satish ji!-
Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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A Bird Song

An extraordinary write!
Thank you for sharing.-Laura

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Quizzing

It' perhaps the first time I have read a longer poem of yours Satish ji! Its simply superb!!!
I never miss reading your poems which are full of beauty and remarkable sensitivity!
But I always wonder why you never respond to my responses.
I loved your poem as much as I enjoy reading your other poems.
And I completely agree with you that no one can write as good as you can...
you cannot
write like me... like me.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Repeating History

End is the same for all in Death in this world to transport to other world in spirit! So, history of all has to repeat itself as designed by Nature! Knowing this let us be ready for the peaceful journey of spirit sure! -T A Ramesh

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The Great Divide

Enveiled behind the masks lie the unhappy sad faces at times. We may enmask our sadness with smiles overtly but the eyes cannot hide the emotions.
Simply loved the lines...
Cut the masks
and you will find a river of sorrow
in the unblinking eyes

Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, karnal

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Death Of An Angel

Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a beautifully excavated dedication.-L. B. Mek

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in prosaic

A well written and confronting poem.. an original poet-Dale Costello, Australia

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An Unasked Eulogy

Another great poem. Thank you.-Trenz Pruca

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Weird Enigma

Beautiful lines..
I will take hold of the night.
There was no referral
of lying truth.

Loved the poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Fading Sheen

The first two lines I just love. There's something about the way you worded them, almost tenderly.-Skyfire

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Tenacity

Stunning! Absolutely superb poem Satish ji!
Loved these lines..
The sand fills your
pockets. You start
licking the salt
jettisoned by violent waves.
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Thoughts In Wind

"You wanted to givea name to
"You wanted to give
a name to my
unborn poem."

That is ageless, quotable material, in and of itself. But yet, to limit the value of the poem to that triplet of lines would be an remarkable undertaking of injustice towards the pen. :) This is, quite simply, special in a most lasting sense. The muse must be, as well.-lyrycsyntyme

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Sonorous Tones

What lovely lines...
The fake blooms. I will
never see the death
of a rose petal

Simply beautiful Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Old Instincts

Love it.-Trenz Pruca

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When Horizon Meets The Moon

I like the variety of phrases
I like the variety of phrases by which the poem proceeds to its conclusion; they are fresh, zesty, and---even one or two of them---highly unusual (in my opinion, at least). I applaud the beauty of this poem.-Starward

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Looking Around

reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts-L. B. Mek

You paint such a vivid picture & add a calming atmosphere to a short & most enjoyable piece.-Unsub

I liked it.-Trenz Pruca

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Striving Hard

Very interesting lines Satish ji...
You
invoke the toddler god
who would kill king cobra
Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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One Moonless Night

wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night.-L. B. Mek

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When The Smoke Rises

I see myself in parts of this poem.
"As the smoke rises- she says goodbye to the naive girl she used to be. Again- she rises" .
Good write.-Laconic Meraki 

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What Was Not Said

Always love to read your beautiful poems Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines...
Golden keys in a ring,
hang down from your neck.
I am imprisoned again.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Some Royality?

beautiful.-MelissaJA

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Falling Debris

Splendid... beautifuly penned sir. :)-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara

Heart touching verse and beautifully penned lines...
Hanged from the roof
to understand the pangs of poverty.

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

wonderfil poem sir.-Ramakant Puranik, Bangalore

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Unaging

I absolutely loved your work ..the questions you have raised and the thoughts you have provoked .We do loose our ways to find people sometimes , we do make bad choices even if we know we are making them and we do dissappear in the world some people create with a simple smile .
love-Ankita Dwivedi 

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In Your Own Temple

Wow! Superb lines...
You speak via eyes,
how to live in sanctum sanctorum
Loved the verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, karnal

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Morning Landscape

wonderful!
I wish I wasn't as ignorant of some of the context you were alluding to, I imagine the read would have been that much more profound.-L. B. Mek

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The Atavism

Ever read something so deep and mind-blowing that you lay your head back afterwards and try to recover from the overwhelming emotions? I just did, reading this one.-nourayasmine

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Watercolors

I love all of your poems. I love all of your metaphors. I love all of your thoughts. You are an inspiration. You are a brilliant writer.-nourayasmine

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This Violence

Lovely lines...

Worst was not enough
I want to drink hemlock
to turn my neck blue.
Simply loved the beautiful poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Pain Of Pain

Nice. Happy Independence Day sir.-Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal 

Loved he beautiful lines Satish Ji...
This was invisible
love, before sunrise. Dream gazer
goes green in dark.-
Happy Independence Day! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Life's Pilgrimage

Hello Satishverma,
A superb ✍ write.
Life is indeed a journey.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.-FineB

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Reaching Out

Don't stop writing! I should take my own advice lol-RiverJordan

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Understanding Me

Such beautiful lines...
Where do we meet
at horizon? I wanted to
say hello to bright moon.

Wow! loved the poem so much Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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The Blessings Fail

What a complicated poem, I'm not even sure what you intended to be about but it resounds with meaning in me. Love lost and seeking meaning in apocryphal scrawlings on the wall. You did not set a scene as much as you set a feeling.-T.S. Ulmus 

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Of Unknown Roots

I love your poems!
I get lost in your words.-A passing lyric

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Against The Winds

Build your own sky!-allets

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Hyperaesthesia

Beautifully expressed...
You generate your
own rains to wash the stains

Loved the poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Compressed Emotions

This is absolutely beautiful!-Gracy Judith

A truly beautiful read.-Milly Hayward

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My Penance

Yikes-RiverJordan

Thank you for sharing! Please check out my poems!-Audax

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I Will Not Be Back

Satish sir such a beautiful poem...I'm lost for words.-Gracy Judith

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Where Dreams Are Killed

Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.........beautiful

Define
truth in darkness
stopping butterflies by moon
of life
terrible beauty is born here-Mahtab Bangalee

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In Bell Time

Moon was not at all dead. Moon was very calm and we felt moon's beam. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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My Penance

Yikes-RiverJordan

Thank you for sharing! Please check out my poems!-Audax

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What Else You Should Know

Who am I?
I search my name on your face.
You won't recognize a lost coin...........expressive expression on the finder existence; wanderer through long pavement-Mahtab Bangalee

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My Craft Trembles

Great writing sir ji..... -Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

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Will You Know?

Nice one.....

Life- with full of an elegance
Thursday, July 23, 2020
11:22 AM

dead may be buried heaps below
but his work shall allow
lots of controversies to come on the fore
and make many people feel sore

so live in a simple way
but show the magnanimity in all the way
life is not that important
but how you lived is talked about and instant -Hasmukh Mehta ahmedabad

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Little Feet Measuring Earth

An intriguing and perhaps introspective verse which is thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Parting The Ways

Amazing.-Nkululeko Xaba

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Hope Dies Daily

so true and the irony is this becomes the only truth in 2020.. hopes dying daily in different eyes and in different homes... :-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara

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Beauty Of Truth

As usual, these verses are loaded with deep philosophical thoughts. Give much to ponder over.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad 

beautifully written sir, wondering through whole this writeup.-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara 

Beautiful Poetry Sir ... -Komal Sharma, Jaipur

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A Letter Unwritten To You

The morning glory always inspires you and all of us. You have interestingly written a beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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In Yellow Moon

i am still gaining confidence in commenting as an early experience upset me but i want to say this had going off in different directions and really got me thinking. a challenging poem i find so much more interesting. -DianeKey6

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Snow Flurries

Lovely and painful... I felt like I knew where you were going from the first line. Yet it was a shock nonetheless.-jarcher54

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Compressed Emotions

A truly beautiful read.-Milly Hayward

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Blue Targets

"I will think of you during break.
I was teaching pure truths..." Pure truth helps in motivating life in a greater realm. This poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Becoming Otherself

Sun is visited by red
moon in twilight, before parting
once a day for a kiss..........lovely scene is delineated-Mahtab Bangalee

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Light Luggage

reading your work is a
reading your work is a privilege-eleven_eleven

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My Pledge

Your poems are very amazing and these are really heart touching. You have interestingly penned this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Sun Was Cooling

Beautifully expressed...
There was so much
noise between the full stops.
Words forgot to say prayer.

Loved the poem very much Satish ji!
Your poems are simply superb!- Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Trying To Remember

"unliving death"
Nice image.-allets

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Beware Of Pain

Comment: No benefit comes.
Your fingers speak for the broken
faith. Where gods sleep?
........amazing questionku-Mahtab Bangalee

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Losing The Vision

Loved this for me one of your best. Glad to see it nominated.-Milly Hayward

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Drunk Like Black Stones

The way you put words together is a masterpiece within itself.-PoeticBiscuit

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Dreamscapes

Amazing work sir, though maths was never my favorite...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

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Enactor

So many ways of responding to poetry... I will remember this one, being mauled by a raging tiger. Yes, we've all been shaken like a helpless prey by the right poem, or the art of poesy in the right hands... Countee Cullen, Yeats, Blake, Sappho, Anne Carson... and sometimes a humble community poet on MPS!-jarcher54

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Creation Of A Myth

Those first two stanzas have an overwhelming verbal power! Very wisely and strategically, you dial it down a notch in order to give the remaining lines a coversational tone---a very musical effect altogether. -
Starward

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Deceiving None

Excellent write-Stephen

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Pain Of Surrender

A style enticing. A real sense of beauty with the stylish imagery.- unni krishnan atiyodiZf5, payyanur

The theme of reconciliation is depicted in the last stanza.....Loved the way you've shown here......thank you sir.... -Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

Beautifully composed Sir, enjoyed reading it..-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

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When Truth Was Exhumed

Simply superb...
No I don't want
to learn the art of
cheating at rising sun.
Loved the verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

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Wholeness

I am re-reading Laurell K. Hamilton Vampire Hunter novels--8 re-done so far this summer--ate em paperbacks 200 pgs. A group of Vampires is a Kiss Of Vampires-allets

Fantastic imagery, really made the poem seem more tangible than just words. I really like this one.-Starward

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Why Love Is Called Flame?

The most sought after aspect of love and it's vast power on the person in love discussed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Taking Sand Bath

Although I am not sure I am correctly reading the poem's implied back story (that is my fault, not the poem's), its sheer evocative power compensates for any misreading on my part. I really like the mystery provided by the evocation.-Starward

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Saviour Was Sad

Beautiful lines..
First poem was
written for unborn you
in my turbulent life

Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Priest Writes On Wall

Never read anything so beautiful about pain dying... Good work sir...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

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Watching A Miracle

Beautiful lines...
Be strong to honor
the dignity of the human
patience in flames.

Lovely verse Satish ji...as always!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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How To Decipher

"Man simply is" like a god.-Greg Wilson 

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Strange Privacy

How many more
will have to die?-Laura

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Leaves Are Changing Colors

Loved the lines :
Vestigial pain
was insulting. You always
feel a presence.- Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

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Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad
of poems.

Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle 

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Undressing

Beautiful poem.-Starward

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Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle

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Going Insane

A smoke signal is all it needs.-Rini Markle

To perceive
And to be perceived
Are two faces of the same coin
Only difference is
One is visible
And the other is hidden.
Respecting each others word
Honours every human being
And looking good over bad
Always makes matter cool
Win or loss is not the matter
Just changing angle is needed
To work things better.

Very true Sir things go insane that way only.-Varsha M

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The Earthen Death

For the most part, I read your poems but most of the times I’m not sure what they are about. :(
All I know is that some of them capture me. Thanks for sharing with us.-Everlasting

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History Repeats

A bit confused on what it means. Is it about a vampire? I'm very curious to its meaning.-MantaStyle 

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Abrasions

...a poem ache....-shamamama

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Blinking Lights

I like the feel of this, the way it flows and the conclusion which I think we all already knew!!-Catriona Abrahams

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Cuckoo Will Sing Again

I like this time traveller poem, it feels comfortable and familiar. I guess that's what poetry really is. All poets telling the same story, just using different words.-Catriona Abrahams

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Lost Home

God, I will never
understand you. What happened
when you were present everywhere? .....wow great expressive; like this piece.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Diving In Shallow Water

The power wants to celebrate the dark.. this line leads the poetic meaning in deep thought...well penned-Mahtab Bangalee

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I Remember

Wounds inflicted by a person is unforgettable. Lovely poem, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi 

Every past moment that hurts teaches us a lot! Lovely lines...
Soon I will pick
up bloody path of learning,
what I am, I was
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Human Tragedy

Touchy poem sir. We all do out of our own understanding but we fail to respect other's efforts. This confusion ruins all. Yes when humans stop to communicate tress and stones have to call out loud
" Can we seal the borders of pain.'
Well expressed poem. Admirations Sir.-Varsha M

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The Man And God

Liberation and love – all creatures of the Earth seek these two. Loved the poem, sir.- Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Deadbeat

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it-Coltron07

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron07

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!-Dr Dillip K Swain

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'!
The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.-Khairul Ahsan

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.-Kevin Patrick

A concise and insightful verse.
A witty philosophical reflection.-Chinedu Dike

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations.-Bill Cantrell

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony.-Dr Tony Brahmin

To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations.-Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Deadbeat
epitaph slipping from the moon
to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........-Mahtab Bangalee

To beat to the drum of Om we are not reborn.-Robert M Smith

A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning-Jayatissa K.Liyanage

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron

Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it.-Coltron


Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony-Dr Tony Brahmin

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Your last stanza is outstanding.-Jane Campion

death
cannot touch
the dust immortally!-Mahtab Bangalee

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem. -Sylvia Frances Chan

A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day.-Matthew Holloway

Well done, impactful with lesser words but powerful profundity. Congrats on POD poem of the day....-Butch Decatoria


You raise great thought with your words.
If I may say....may I not return.-Lyn Paul


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Jumping The Wall

Loved these lines, sir...

'I will
wear the hijab of moon
to meet my lover.' - Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Changing Vocabulary

I have got to read more of your poetry! This poem has an awesome bite to it. Definite; y a 10+++ and onto my fav list.-Susan Williams

Now you will sleep
in my poems, and I sleep on your lips..........sueprb there lover and beloved in peaceful mind though thousands of dissimilarities in habits........-Mahtab Bangalee

You used to say, I
was your accident, but you smiled...An amazing expression of this poem scribbles mind.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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On Naked Paper

You blend sexuality and poetic creativeness well. The last 3 lines are especially original. To my mind, you're among the 10 best poets on the site. Isn't your first name "Satish"? Unless my memory is playing tricks on me, I think it is.-Yacov Mitchenko

Such beautifully expressed words ;-}-Weeping willow

So beautiful!-Ifumi - poeticifi

Wow Love this -JaxSpade

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Humanized Pain

Loved these lines..
In a sacrifice
ritual. Blue lines are
appearing on my hands.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Like Haikus

Fractured Haiku
Nestor ~S~ - allets

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Not To Annihilate

Nice composition which talks about love and expression, Sir!-Padma, Khammam 

If we believe in the doctrine of rebirth it indeed peels of our pain of being a mortal.
Wonderful concept crafted beautifully, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Beautiful lines...
A chance to learn
the mystical Pythagorean
shift of love's angle
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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On Naked Paper

You blend sexuality and poetic creativeness well. The last 3 lines are especially original. To my mind, you're among the 10 best poets on the site. Isn't your first name "Satish"? Unless my memory is playing tricks on me, I think it is.-Yacov Mitchenko

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How To Think

Wow! You have some very
Wow! You have some very striking ways of expression. " You rustle the hair of unknown pain", " nightmares hiss"! Unique and grabbing!-Cascade

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Deeply Upset

I love the words you have chosen. Brilliantly written my favorite stanza

The whistling pain of the

words, brings

the blood flowers.

Thank you for sharing.-Vanessa

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Repeat Sins

Beautiful lines....
Myth of invincibility
cracks, in the dawn
of miracles. The vibes take
over the song of shadows.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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My Dilemma

Nothingness goes beyond the valuation of freedom and we still notice that peace is needed for something. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.- Kumarmani Mahakul

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Being Grateful

Powerful indeed!-Laura

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Knowing Myself

Beautiful lines...
Your presence
sits in my poems. Do
we become human after
separation?
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Mannerism

wow..-Rania Moallem

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Undying Existence

beasty pain is a falling in love with out of self knowledge! ! ! !-Mahtab Bangalee

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Broken Peace

Walking in dark
You have a hope. Sun will
rise soon. You will find the truth..... impressive inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem based on positiveness is well executed.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Another Harbinger

Bad things spring suddenly to surprise us. Truth is lost. In that sense it's a nerve chilling poem, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi, May 24, 2020

Beautiful lines...
Words would suggest, but
not explain. I was
afraid of losing the truth.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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It Was A Trauma

Astonishing thought provoking words.-LAWLESS

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I Ask Nothing

Good concept and so soothing to hear from you, Sir! So sweet!-Padma, Khammam

This is extremely beautiful, sir. And I understood the poem. I feel sorry to say that I don't have that intellectual capacity to go beyond the layers of your poems and thus I never commented though I read all of your poems.- Sangeeta Das, Delhi


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Art Of Punishment

Your face tells the
truth of timeless pain...The art of punishment is an amazing and brilliant poem penned cleverly.-Kumarmani Mahakul


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Coding An Ocean

It kinda gets lost in itself in that third stanza. Writing is entirely dependent on the audience after all. If this has a significant personal reference to you then that is all that really matters, but as a reader I got lost there. Overall I get a message of a person who is more connected to their lover than the lover is to them. Perhaps a one night stand, somebody feeling taken advantage of after a first date.-Author Gus


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Burying The Past

Your legacy travels with you to discover the ruins. No more pain acquires the path rather joyous mood helps you to proceed. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Will You Admit?

a miracle of language.-

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Abrasions

Lovely lines Satish ji...
Scooped the dust
of ruins. Brilliant gems were
scattered by you.

Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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No Vendetta

At right hand with righteousness, we can meet our creator God with greater hope. This poem is very amazingly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Seed Money

Loved this.-WildMoonChild

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Nothing To Mend

how pretty. the virgin arms
how pretty. the virgin arms of a terrorist is so beautiful
The Southern Violinist.-Southern_Violinist

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Black Stones

My head aches, when I
think of my destiny...... outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Irrelevantly

thank you for sharing the beauty of your words.-Herbert Witzen

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Nothingness

A highly thought-provoking verse, Satish ji. Yes, humanity will ask God whether he has always been fair to it, and if not, why? -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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It Bleeds

Comment: Black sky breaks the eyes and before the dawn we wonderfully feel this truth. This poem is brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Love To Learn

Nature does not tolerate violence. Nature allows life to get light of wisdom with peace. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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When Galaxies Multiply

To create your universe
I think there was no absolute.....God's creation is very wonderful definitely. This is an excellent poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Searching Peace

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Wanted a brutally
honest truth, moon struck
but ready to give blond.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Let's Decide

I will not claim to understand all your imagery, but I liked the way this flowed. This was my favorite verse:
'It spills the light
for a troubled window
cracked by hail.'
I thought the image was just beautiful. My only suggestion would be to change 'for a troubled window' to 'from a troubled window' for better clarity.-Skyfire

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Bolting Dark

A nice reflection of inspiring thoughts. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Like An Oedipus

This poem is very impressive, especially the phrase "The Antarctica of pain" and the stanza it is in.-Starward

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Blood Prints

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Moon was hauling
the night. There was no ending
of empty words.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Knowing Myself

Very beautiful and true.-Riju Bhargava, PRINCE

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Call Of Faith

A beautiful poem on trust is well executed and amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Seeking Peace

Spectacular verse, as always! Beautiful lines Satish ji...
I wouldn't touch
the aura of falling star
to stitch the wounds.

Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Translating Death

I really love how you convey the images in this verse. It speaks on many things in a few choice words. I'm really impressed.-Willys Watson 

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New Religions

This is a good work to create awareness among those who think that they can do anything in the name of religion. But ye fact h ki jistne bhi traditions h jo hum follow karte h India me unka sabka ek scientific reason h and so we follow them but aaj ki generation in sabko bakwas manti h aur ye bade hi dukh ki baat h... I agree with the point that u highlighted here ki sacrificing someones life and doing all the sins in name of punya is indeed not what we call dharma..actually humne toh apna dharm kab ka tyag diya h aur in sab sacrificing lives vale rituals ke peeche pade h..But let me remind u ki jo rituals hote h unka ek significance hota h aur vo aise hi nhi kiye jaate and there are some reasons whom u coming from a spiritual country like India, must respect. Not all the rituals and the things our pandits say are lies and trash. Try to respect ur traditions and the place from where u come. I do agree that killing someone is indeed a crime but saying those words are lies is not correct. Religion has taken a terrible form in this kalyug but one must not forget that it was made to sho people correct path u can blame those who do not convey this correctly but agar teacher hi galat padha raha h toh aap school ko q blame kare...it's like that.-Aradhana 

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Talking To Spirit

Spectacular as always!-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

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Naked Truths

Beautiful lines .....
Muscularity of
oath melts. The fusion cracks.
You move away.

Thanks for sahring Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Inheritance

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
I do not want to
call you my yesterday. Past
takes revenge. -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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The Road

"You change the clothes,
alter the sex,
exchange the god,
and refuse to die."

Oh my god. Yes, that much we cling to life.-nourayasmine

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Quietness

You catch a simple moment, and turn into a gem of poetry. I like your philosophy.-nourayasmine

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Of All Time

Beautiful lines Satish ji...

Bare foot I walk
towards the burning pyre, to
see the ascent of ashes. -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Punctuality

I was a big fan of you, before you got popular! And I'm glad you keep on posting poems.
I agree with MarryAnne, I read your poetry and read again, and every time I do that, I interpret your writing in a whole different way.
The conversation between the priest and repentant made me think this poem is about "god", or a high power that this "cult" has faith in. The cult that moves in circle - that never changes? You mean by that, all religions?
The veil, I thought you were talking about the sky, or space, or whatever we will be able to discover through the years.
So, what I got from this poem is that someday, we will discover the mystery around us, and we will unravel the ugly side of death, unable to pretend there's an after life anymore.
Yeah, I feel this is about a day all humans stand face to face with the whole truth.
I like the way your poetry makes me think.
Just one suggestion, I guess if you use less dots, it would be easier to read. Unless of course it was intentional, and I had no idea. I just felt better punctuation would help us interpret your words more. :)
Beautiful poetry as always.-nourayasmine

Your poetry is unlike anything I've ever read before. It's full of intrigue, an ambiguity that I can't help but admire. I see the category as nature, yet I like how you brought in the example of the conversation between the repentant and the priest. Like in a confessional. Being on time for death? Does this insinuate a coming storm, the clouds covering the moon. The absence of something.
So thought-provoking!-Poet on the Piano

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Learning You

Beautiful lines Satish ji...

You cannot roll the
carpet after the blaze.
The tangerines will give
a big surprise. -Giti Tyagi, KARNAL

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Blue Sunstroke

Beautiful lines Satish Sir...
I was knitting
my life near hornets nest.
Words betray the anguish,
giving credit to hemlock. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Nothingness

Very valid questions uncle. Ones which always keep coming back.-Riju Bhargava, PRINCE 

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Drifting

Words keep on changing the sounds

Lovely lines Satish Sir!
Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Forgotten

BEAUTIFUL POEM ... -R R Gandikota, KAKINADA

Good. You can put you ideas meticulously.-Erfan K, Wandoor

Beautiful lines Satish Sir..

You walk in air
without leaving footprints,
giving me nothing.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Beautiful poem sir! Your poems are always full of so much beauty of experience, always a joy to read! -Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

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This Myth Of Life

I enjoyed the read but I found this very sad as I've never felt "alone" in all my life, not even as a child. Oh, I've been alone and I lived a bachelor's life for nearly 30 years. I've suffered the loss of both my parents and a few of my siblings but I've never known utter "loneliness". I can say that no ruins last forever. I share that belief with Shelley and his "Ozymandias". Life has a way of moving us all in our destined directions, whether we walk, crawl or need be carried.-Fabian G. Franklin 

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Entangled Sufferings

You have all reverence, no doubt poetical brains
Whistling wonderful words of dazzling brilliance.-Dalton

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Atonement

The false beauty of everyone never tricked anyone.-𝑺𝒖𝒛𝒚 𝑩𝒆𝒓𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒌𝒚

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Who Was Blessed

A very beautiful poem Satish ji!
Loved the poem, especially these lines...

The Sunday moon was
always beautiful. You stay
on terrace to say goodbye
before closing the book.

There was eternal pain,
outside and inside. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Tolerance

beautiful piece...philosophically splendid-whisperingquill

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The Charity

Lovely poem Satish Sir!

Loved these lines...
The nascent pain
is taking birth. The seed
cannot promise to become
a tree.- Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Celebrating Blood Signed Will

Very beautiful poem Satish ji!
Lovely lines...
You tried to catch
the flames without burning
your hands.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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What Else I Will Do

"I think like a python engulfing more than I can swallow."
Wow! What a line. ----- Stephen

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Cold-Bloodedness

I like the depth of this poem and the underlying emotions which speak with a calm sense of coldness....excellent!-Meena Krish

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The Exit

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!
Thanks for sharing!

Unquenchable thirst
was me. My head in a spin,
I go beyond the words,
to find the clapping hands. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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ECHINACEA

Yes, everything has a price to be paid. And perhaps we are paying the price of the so called development and progress that we have been running after...
Every kiss has a
price.I love you green.

This is the time when humans need to slow down, introspect, contemplate and be a little more considerate towards the earth and all other beings on this planet. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala


Dear Satish ji! Your cute floral poem rightly says "Every kiss has a price". And every hiss has its bliss if only we are active & alert in all our senses.-U Atreya Sarma, Hyderabad

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Black Currants

Not digging your stuff lately.-LAWLESS

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September Woes

Beautiful and colorful!-anonymousblue

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Secret Whereabouts

An evocative picture of the current situation. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Believing in Myths

Splendid Sir, absolutely beautiful.

 It reminded me of another beautiful piece by Dr. Rahi Masoom Raza. I am sure you'd like this: brilliantly sang by Chitra Singh:

Dil ke ujle kaagaz par 

Hum kaisa geet likhen 

Bolo tumko gair likhen 

Ya apna meet likhen... 

Neele ambar ki angnai 

Mein taaron ke phool 

Mere pyaase hoton par 

Hai angaaron ke phool... 

In phoolon ko aakhir apni 

Haar ya jeet likhen... 

Koi puraana sapna de do 

Aur kuch meethe bol

Lekar hum nikle hain apni 

Aakhon ke kash khol...

Shaam khadi hai ek chameli 

Ke pyaale mein shabnam 

Jamuna ji ke oongli pakde 

Khel raha hai madhuban... 

Aise mein ganga jal se 

Radha ki preet likehn... 

Bolo tumko gair likhen 

Ya apna meet likhen...

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Recuperating

Interesting. But I have problems making the connections.-tundrol

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Not A Renegade

Heart touching poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Touching Depths

Be Well
My wish 4 u and the those you love.-allets

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New Family

Nice presentation Satish ji!
To be honest, there
was no poem today.
A refusal to celebrate
the loss of truth in me. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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The Dead Don't Care

What we think we may do we may only know when the moment is upon us. We always hope for the rose.-icelandicblue 

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My Candle Burns All Night

are about to be unbelievable. Be well-allets

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Between This And That

As hard hitting as tough decisions. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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We Shan't Die

I Adore
A great time image.-allets

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Imitation Of Supreme

Very true. Fake publicity ultimately leads to an irreversible fall, fatality. Thanks sir for a thoughtful verse. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Out There

I must keep learning-Larry

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