Dear Satish,
This one in particular strikes a chord for me.
Thanks for posting- Dick
Some of the stanzas, so self-contained, are poems in themselves.
The last is breathtakingly dramatic for several reasons. One, I think,
is the fact that the lines are of almost a uniform # of syllables.
I find the first stanza particularly evocative, too.
There is a some mystery, for me, in several of the stanzas,
a clear image and a mystery.- realnothings.
Wow wow wow wow
how may it be you write so bitter and yet so sweet
so ugly and yet so exquisitely tenderly beautiful
so dark and yet flaming in magnificent spectrum of saturated rainbow colors
I love your writing, Satish Verma- eldyheart
This one in particular strikes a chord for me.
Thanks for posting- Dick
The last is breathtakingly dramatic for several reasons. One, I think,
is the fact that the lines are of almost a uniform # of syllables.
I find the first stanza particularly evocative, too.
There is a some mystery, for me, in several of the stanzas,
a clear image and a mystery.- realnothings.
how may it be you write so bitter and yet so sweet
so ugly and yet so exquisitely tenderly beautiful
so dark and yet flaming in magnificent spectrum of saturated rainbow colors
I love your writing, Satish Verma- eldyheart
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