I like the subtlety you use in imaging imperfections.
I like the universality of this, even if its context is a relating of 2 people.
I think your final stanza in this is brilliant!
How many poems have I read, here and elsewhere, that are exactly this!
..."a cheap wine/in a golden chalice,/for a lipless mouth"- windchime
I like the universality of this, even if its context is a relating of 2 people.
I think your final stanza in this is brilliant!
How many poems have I read, here and elsewhere, that are exactly this!
..."a cheap wine/in a golden chalice,/for a lipless mouth"- windchime
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