A CRAZY THEME

• interesting touching poem.- KAUSIK
• A very intersting poem.-Debs
• interesting poem, and thought provoking .....that caterpillars with with iron shoes...i saw that one , that's the backhoe used for the constructions with trademark Catepillar maybe.... on-Ency Bearis

Hello...I have just read your poem and find it so interesting a write...caterpillars wearing iron shoes...so poetic a thought...brings to mind a line I wrote in a poem of "when bats pretended to be butterflies, tangled in my hair"...sorry to intrude that thought here on your page of poetry...I enjoyed reading your poem...more than once, I might add. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

Next time i'm driving through Ajmer,and if I should see an arrow pointing to the Verma abode, remind me to barbeque in your front yard...as I do not want to be accused of tossing coal on Faith! -Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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